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hunuh
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21. "RE: round one"
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>dont give a fuck about ric's rhymes, dimes, and other two bit
>cares
>you're nothing to me ric! just one of zin's pubic hairs


>i been blessing, this board with straight hotness for weeks
>now i'll shit on your rep till ya miracle reeks
>this miracle's weak, i got stronger foundations
>my flows technically sound like cars built by asians
>it takes a nation- of millions to hold me back
>im ill like flavor flav in the days before crack
>stand back, cause you know how vicious my attacks is
>blitzkrieged zin and ric, now the next bitch is access.....
>

you finished strong

but the lines i cut are the only ones im really feeling.

idk, your stuff is solid but technically its kinda basic, no knock on you by any means, just different strokes you know.
i think your punches could be alot stronger if you stayed away from just making every word at the end of a bar rhyme and dropped some internal rhymes to speed the flow up, because its not that your shit is bad, i just get bored when im reading it because it doesn't flow super smooth.

regardless you finished that one up strong.

i was diggin the last eight bars alot.


>
> MiracleRic:
>
> "a first round hearse found
>
>          

>u spit off-balance/ soft ballads,
>i spit tounge in cheek,…u…toss salads…
>u all phallic, my raw palette,
>is equipped with spectrums,
>u couldn’t drop hot shit, if u spit from rectums,

lmfao.

>u toads, im sick like I lick infections
>while u pose, and win battles thru loopholes
>I poop foes, into porcelain caskets,
>Nuke’s froze, I teach courses and classes
>On how to spit dope, and export to the masses,
>Of course it’s a classic, Now that’s flow fellas,
>I’ll kick with so much force in ya asses,
>you’ll have a toe fetish
>im the new vet, and u leapt, a lil too froggy,
>u? threat? .... new hobby!

sick.

>my battlecry’s vicious, u even whine lame,
>“Ric wont spit within my timeframe”
>i silence cats, i push u vaginas back
>with my balance act, talk shit,
>did violence crack when he spat,
>do calc, u alf, "got any cats?"
>

finished strong too

i give round one to ric.

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when whodini made friends it was well spoken.

  

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hdub vs. miracleric..... [View all] , hdub, Tue May-10-05 02:26 AM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
round one
May 10th 2005
1
dont get mad... (honest critique)
May 10th 2005
13
RE: dont get mad... (honest critique)
May 10th 2005
14
round two
May 10th 2005
2
(whew) round two
May 10th 2005
15
RE: round two
May 10th 2005
22
RE: round two
May 16th 2005
66
      ahem, ahem....
May 16th 2005
67
           u clowns are hilarious...
May 16th 2005
73
RE: my honest opinion?
May 10th 2005
3
fair enough....
May 10th 2005
6
      RE: you just need 2 rounds to win right?
May 10th 2005
7
           just one mans opinion...
May 10th 2005
9
round three
May 10th 2005
4
RE: round three
May 10th 2005
8
RE: round three
May 10th 2005
10
      LOL
May 10th 2005
11
(sigh)
May 10th 2005
16
RE: (sigh)
May 10th 2005
24
      wordplay is cool but...
May 12th 2005
49
RE: round three
May 10th 2005
23
      its quite a nice surprise....
May 10th 2005
28
get ya votes in!! n/m
May 10th 2005
5
RiC!
May 10th 2005
12
Lemme Vote, Lemme Vote!!!
May 10th 2005
17
      RE: Lemme Vote, Lemme Vote!!!
May 10th 2005
18
RE: hdub vs. miracleric.....
May 10th 2005
19
Photo......
May 10th 2005
20
Sweetheart ...
May 10th 2005
26
i have seen what photo was sayin
May 15th 2005
59
ummmm.....
May 10th 2005
29
lol....
May 10th 2005
33
awww did i hurt your feelings???....
May 10th 2005
31
i saw the same scenario
May 10th 2005
25
Vote: hdub- most improved
May 10th 2005
27
RE: Vote: hdub- most improved
May 10th 2005
30
      seriously....
May 10th 2005
32
RE: hdub vs. miracleric.....
May 10th 2005
34
so far....
May 11th 2005
35
make a poll..
May 11th 2005
36
      Just a thought
May 11th 2005
37
      bragging rights is fun...
May 11th 2005
40
      thats cool with me completely....
May 11th 2005
38
           RE: thats cool with me completely....
May 11th 2005
41
                RE: thats cool with me completely....
May 11th 2005
42
                     RE: thats cool with me completely....
May 11th 2005
43
RE: hdub vs. miracleric.....
May 11th 2005
39
Hdub
May 12th 2005
44
RE: Hdub
May 12th 2005
45
      RE: Hdub
May 12th 2005
46
           my vote
May 12th 2005
47
                take your time...
May 12th 2005
48
the polls are about to close.....
May 13th 2005
50
RE: the polls are about to close.....
May 13th 2005
51
well ric....
May 13th 2005
52
archive?
May 13th 2005
53
RE: archive?
May 14th 2005
54
i see you posting ric....
May 14th 2005
55
      RE: i see you posting ric....
May 14th 2005
57
Archive.....now thats comedy
May 14th 2005
56
u r entitled to your opinion
May 15th 2005
60
      RE: u r entitled to your opinion
May 15th 2005
61
           so this is just you saying....
May 16th 2005
62
                RE: so this is just you saying....
May 16th 2005
63
                     RE: so this is just you saying....
May 16th 2005
64
                     RE: so this is just you saying....
May 16th 2005
65
Ric
May 14th 2005
58
no offense but who are you?
May 16th 2005
70
RIC AND HDUB BATTLE AGAIN
May 16th 2005
68
May the best man win
May 16th 2005
69
no thanx
May 16th 2005
72
      see ric's already had enough....
May 18th 2005
77
           RE: see ric's already had enough....
May 18th 2005
78
                so wait....
May 21st 2005
86
Ric killed him
May 16th 2005
71
RE: Ric killed him
May 16th 2005
74
      or u...lemon kid
May 16th 2005
75
           RE: or u...lemon kid
May 16th 2005
76
                bipolar
May 19th 2005
79
                     RE: bipolar
May 19th 2005
80
                          your the one who won't drop a verse and keeps talking shit in my posts
May 19th 2005
81
                               RE: your the one who won't drop a verse and keeps talking shit in my pos...
May 19th 2005
82
                                    because i wanted to battle not bicker...
May 19th 2005
83
                                         RE: because i wanted to battle not bicker...
May 19th 2005
84
                                              *passes lemonhead prozac*
May 19th 2005
85
                                                   lol....
May 21st 2005
87

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