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>dont give a fuck about ric's rhymes, dimes, and other two bit >cares >you're nothing to me ric! just one of zin's pubic hairs
>i been blessing, this board with straight hotness for weeks >now i'll shit on your rep till ya miracle reeks >this miracle's weak, i got stronger foundations >my flows technically sound like cars built by asians >it takes a nation- of millions to hold me back >im ill like flavor flav in the days before crack >stand back, cause you know how vicious my attacks is >blitzkrieged zin and ric, now the next bitch is access..... >
you finished strong
but the lines i cut are the only ones im really feeling.
idk, your stuff is solid but technically its kinda basic, no knock on you by any means, just different strokes you know. i think your punches could be alot stronger if you stayed away from just making every word at the end of a bar rhyme and dropped some internal rhymes to speed the flow up, because its not that your shit is bad, i just get bored when im reading it because it doesn't flow super smooth.
regardless you finished that one up strong.
i was diggin the last eight bars alot.
> > MiracleRic: > > "a first round hearse found " > >
>u spit off-balance/ soft ballads, >i spit tounge in cheek,…u…toss salads… >u all phallic, my raw palette, >is equipped with spectrums, >u couldn’t drop hot shit, if u spit from rectums,
lmfao.
>u toads, im sick like I lick infections >while u pose, and win battles thru loopholes >I poop foes, into porcelain caskets, >Nuke’s froze, I teach courses and classes >On how to spit dope, and export to the masses, >Of course it’s a classic, Now that’s flow fellas, >I’ll kick with so much force in ya asses, >you’ll have a toe fetish >im the new vet, and u leapt, a lil too froggy, >u? threat? .... new hobby!
sick.
>my battlecry’s vicious, u even whine lame, >“Ric wont spit within my timeframe” >i silence cats, i push u vaginas back >with my balance act, talk shit, >did violence crack when he spat, >do calc, u alf, "got any cats?" >
finished strong too
i give round one to ric.
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when whodini made friends it was well spoken.
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