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36. "Whoa...."
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this is hard... i'm almost speechless but you got skills. You need to take this to Def Poetry man... people cn build off this poem yo... damn. I love it!

Nubi
______________________________
Do i love you?
Do i lust for you?
Am i a sinner cuz i do the two?
Could you let me know
Right now, please
Bonita applebum

Chorus:

Bonita applebum, you gotta put me on (repeat 4x)

Q-tip:

(pause between every verse)
Hey bonita, glad to meet ya
For the kind of stunning newness, i must have foreseen ya
Hey, being with you is a top priority
Ain't no need to question the authority
Chairman of the board, the chief of affections
You got mine's to swing in your direction
Hey, you're like a hip hop song, you know?
Bonita applebum, you gotta put me on

Chorus

38-24-37 (uh, uh, uh!)
You and me, hun, we're a match made in heaven
I like to kiss ya where some brothas won't
I like to tell ya things some brothas don't
If only you could see through your elaborate eyes
Only you and me, hun, the love never dies
Satisfaction, i have the right tactics
And if you need 'em, i got crazy prophylactics
So far, i hope you like rap songs
Bonita applebum, you gotta put me on


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lament for 4/4. [View all] , Aeon, Sun Aug-22-04 06:07 PM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
silencing...
Aug 22nd 2004
1
Bewailing & Commiserating --
Aug 22nd 2004
2
and now, a title
Aug 23rd 2004
3
RE: lament for 4/4.
Aug 23rd 2004
4
oh he on that bullsh!t again!
Aug 23rd 2004
5
nice title
Aug 23rd 2004
6
way
Aug 23rd 2004
7
welcome back n/m
Aug 23rd 2004
8
this quote came to my mind while reading this
Aug 23rd 2004
9
RE: lament for 4/4.
Aug 23rd 2004
10
up. n/m
Aug 23rd 2004
11
kinda wish i could have finished it.
Aug 24th 2004
12
damn aint seen this name in a minute
Aug 24th 2004
13
amazing....
Aug 24th 2004
14
RE: lament for 4/4.
Aug 25th 2004
15
Um hmmm
Aug 25th 2004
16
yes.
Aug 25th 2004
17
hey folks it's about hip hop.
Aug 26th 2004
18
I See It Now --
Aug 26th 2004
19
duh....lol
Aug 27th 2004
23
I saw it but I interpreted it so that it touched me...
Aug 27th 2004
24
hiphop.
Aug 27th 2004
29
RE: Brilliant..
Aug 26th 2004
20
incredible.
Aug 26th 2004
21
toldju.
Aug 26th 2004
22
RE: lament for 4/4.
Aug 27th 2004
25
RE: lament for 4/4.
Aug 27th 2004
26
archive it....please...
Aug 27th 2004
27
RE: lament for 4/4.
Aug 27th 2004
28
i mean.
Aug 27th 2004
30
      Not At All --
Aug 27th 2004
31
           nah see it how you want to.
Aug 27th 2004
33
i 2nd the call for archival.
Aug 27th 2004
32
and i third.
Aug 27th 2004
34
grand piece
Aug 29th 2004
35
every view...
Aug 29th 2004
37
speechless
Aug 30th 2004
38

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