hey I like the imagery like being there. one thing when u wrote of watching her as she walked ahead of you. somehow i was outside the "Chili Bowl" watchin yall walkin down U street then abruptly bought back when u said it was gettin crowded... It worked tho cause it was like flashback...."Chili Bowl" scene III
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"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder