i dig both pieces, The Anthology's piece, however, takes it to another level visually and the organization/flow/pacing is impeccable... i'd love to see Peter Parker's piece after a few more revisions; there's a lot of great stuff in it that wasn't taken advantage of.

Peter Parker: 8.5

The Anthology: 9.2




oh yeah, this is Seraph by the way, there's been some changes here; i'll login as Seraph so as not to cause confusion.

peace,
~p~

"i thrive best hermit style" - bjork

"my words have been my crutch 4 the longest time...
the most difficult of times..." - eli

peace,
~p~

"i thrive best hermit style" - bjork

"my words have been my crutch 4 the longest time...
the most difficult of times..." - eli