This topic was harder than some of the others because a specific "quote" was used as the guideline for expression & creativity. They both were good, but 3rd i's was a little too short to really get off into it -- And Seraph219 was more visual & graphic with the wordplay.
I dunno -- But 3rd i seemed to have given up before she got started good -- I'm sure had she stretched the flow with more verbage and creativity, it woulda been a close call!
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥