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18. "RE: Brightest Brown"
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Haven't been on the boards for awhile and ther first thing I peep is this piece. Well I must say I enjoyed the first stanza the most. Just had a nice fluidity and visual aspect I liked. 2nd stanza didn't grab me as hard, but the last stanza summed up everything nicely.

Good Job.....



Missin' you like lungs miss oxygen in a chokehold-Muse

The sexual revolution was born in between these thighs waiting to be reinvented.

  
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Brightest Brown [View all] , HottLykeFiyah, Sun May-26-02 07:03 PM
 
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May 26th 2002
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RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
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RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
3
heh.. oh boy.
May 27th 2002
4
RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
5
really?
May 27th 2002
6
RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
7
tell me what you didn't like
May 27th 2002
10
      RE: tell me what you didn't like
May 27th 2002
12
      input appreciated
May 28th 2002
13
           no problem
May 28th 2002
14
      honestly...
May 31st 2002
21
           RE: honestly...what ever
Jun 25th 2002
36
!
May 27th 2002
8
RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
9
steamy.
May 27th 2002
11
RE: Brightest Brown
May 29th 2002
15
like i told you before...
May 29th 2002
16
RE: Brightest Brown
May 29th 2002
17
the whole piece is lovely but
May 30th 2002
19
RE: Brightest Brown
May 30th 2002
20
Oh My...
Jun 01st 2002
22
sunday moanings
Jun 03rd 2002
23
Well, you're just the freaky one, aren't you?
Jun 03rd 2002
24
didnt wanna let this drop.....
Jun 09th 2002
25
RE: Brightest Brown
Jun 14th 2002
26
RE: Brightest Brown
Jun 15th 2002
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RE: Brightest Brown
Jun 16th 2002
28
up
Jun 19th 2002
29
how did i miss THIS??!!??
Jun 19th 2002
30
hot damn chile!
Jun 19th 2002
31
evrybody look @ vet's reply
Jun 19th 2002
32
LET THE CHOICH SAY AMEN!!!!
Jun 20th 2002
33
this was too good
Jun 20th 2002
34
Great writing
Jun 25th 2002
35
this is really good.
Jun 25th 2002
37
! !
Jun 25th 2002
38

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