Very nice piece...I enjoyed the fluidity of the words and the imagery that you created/projected throughout. Also, the way that your words stayed in line with the concept you began from the very first line on down to your ending was tight. i liked that...i kinda felt like you should have repeated the last line two more times changing the word conjured to a similar word for the last two lines so that it would be ..conjured...(synonym for conjured)...(another synonym for conjured)...but that is just a suggestion. anyhow i liked your piece. very nice.