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32. "My Go....."
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First of all this post was an excellent idea.....
I have too many pieces to choose a best, besides IMHO most of them suck! *lol* ... so I ust picked one that I REALLY felt in my heart when I wrote it..... certainly not my best, but it meant a lot to me at the time....

Domestic Silence

She has died this night……..the date is not important
Just know they’ve been together for about a year
She was not the first one killed
By this murderer holding no guilt
But tonight his burning anger shall extinguish her flame
And in his possession, her soul shall wilt
Voiceless words of rage spoken by his cold eyes
Re-tearing a lifetime of healed lacerations in her self-esteem
Still this mockery never felt so welcome
Sarcastic love is better than none at all
Take it as you will, but it’s the only love she’s ever known
And so instead of taking a stand, she allows it to progress
She’s sure he’s a good man that loves her, he’s just under too much stress
Others will try to convince her to run away & just leave him be
But they don’t truly understand, they can’t see all his good qualities
Their not in her tunnel of vision, & thus can’t see the light
Just because his actions make him wrong, doesn’t make me right
If you were as close as I am, you’d see past his temper to the real man
The one that’s loving, caring, & has a gentle hand
(But she has yet to notice that the hand is now a fist……)
She thinks, “I don’t mind that he doesn’t give me flowers” with a silent sigh
But this changes suddenly as his first blow causes a black rose to bloom around her eye
Gritting her teeth she bears it, cause this is her best friend
And this pain over time she’ll actually learn to take pleasure in
So after this fateful night she will never be the same
This one accepted act of violence would leave her forever changed
And though he won’t kill till many years later
With one too many blows to the head
tonight both he & she will fail to recognize the fact
That actually, she’s already dead……….
-KnowOne

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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post your best piece here! [View all] , paperdollpoet, Thu Jul-18-02 10:32 AM
 
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papermoderator.
Jul 18th 2002
1
Me too
Jul 18th 2002
2
      Finally
Aug 27th 2002
83
i'm down...sounds wondeful but...
Jul 18th 2002
3
let me
Jul 19th 2002
4
OKAY!
Jul 19th 2002
5
All rights protected... according to Fireband. I'll sav
Jul 19th 2002
7
I am all for it...
Jul 19th 2002
6
RE: post your best piece here!
Jul 19th 2002
8
yes..
Jul 19th 2002
9
copyrights
Jul 19th 2002
10
not a quick answer..but go to askjeevs.com
Jul 19th 2002
11
Tell you what....
Jul 19th 2002
12
dwgates@casworldmedia.com is the auction contact.
Jul 21st 2002
13
RE: dwgates@casworldmedia.com is the auction contact.
Jul 21st 2002
14
um....humbly raises hand....
Jul 21st 2002
15
Aug 28 comg soon!!
Jul 23rd 2002
16
RE: post your best piece here!
Jul 23rd 2002
17
RE: post your best piece here!
Jul 23rd 2002
18
      here!
Jul 23rd 2002
19
           AnitaJ & WILDOUT
Jul 27th 2002
30
don't sleep folks..
Jul 24th 2002
20
this space reserved for
Jul 24th 2002
21
up
Jul 25th 2002
22
An enigma with a stigma attached
Jul 25th 2002
23
wow!
Jul 25th 2002
24
      RE: wow!
Jul 25th 2002
25
      sweet beezus!
Jul 25th 2002
26
           RE: sweet beezus!
Jul 25th 2002
27
      lol
Jul 26th 2002
29
my drop...
Jul 25th 2002
28
up
Jul 31st 2002
31
RE: My Go.....
Aug 26th 2002
78
Madawaka's things
Jul 31st 2002
33
Not really my best,
Aug 01st 2002
34
Oh yeah, Shoutouts to
Aug 02nd 2002
36
The Endless Melody Of Love by Ergobliss & Anita J.
Aug 02nd 2002
35
*frowns*
Aug 02nd 2002
37
doesn't matter at all
Aug 02nd 2002
38
i want u to read something
Aug 02nd 2002
39
Aug 28th LAST DAY.
Aug 05th 2002
40
RE: post your best piece here!
Aug 05th 2002
41
don't say i didn't warn you...
Aug 08th 2002
42
aug 28th!
Aug 09th 2002
43
get your shit together!!
Aug 12th 2002
44
ugly ass mongrels
Aug 12th 2002
45
Needing You
Aug 13th 2002
46
don't make me choke some of ya'll!
Aug 14th 2002
47
RE: don't make me choke some of ya'll!
Aug 14th 2002
48
okplaya
Aug 14th 2002
49
why don't ya get
Aug 14th 2002
50
      they saw the post..if they wanted to do..they would hav
Aug 15th 2002
51
up for the sleepies
Aug 15th 2002
52
you think i ain't gonna up this thing to death!!
Aug 16th 2002
53
here's my entries.
Aug 16th 2002
54
and
Aug 16th 2002
55
      RE: and
Aug 18th 2002
57
finally...
Aug 16th 2002
56
"The Truth" by Exodus
Aug 18th 2002
58
up..
Aug 19th 2002
59
opportunity knockinig
Aug 20th 2002
60
only a couple more days before you are assed out..
Aug 22nd 2002
61
here's mine
Aug 22nd 2002
62
collaboration w/ muse
Aug 22nd 2002
63
my bio
Aug 22nd 2002
64
my bio
Aug 23rd 2002
70
A mental change of self
Aug 22nd 2002
65
here's my drop..
Aug 22nd 2002
66
can i drop a hiaku?
Aug 22nd 2002
68
up
Aug 27th 2002
81
as follows . . . .
Aug 22nd 2002
67
yeah..ya'll are doing good!
Aug 23rd 2002
69
last week!!
Aug 24th 2002
71
get your shit together!!
Aug 25th 2002
72
hey, lei...
Aug 25th 2002
73
Bio...
Aug 26th 2002
74
      just under the wire:
Aug 26th 2002
75
I made it!
Aug 26th 2002
76
ok biscuit here's mine
Aug 26th 2002
77
The Blood(Protect It)
Aug 26th 2002
79
up
Aug 27th 2002
80
sentiments & sediment
Aug 27th 2002
82
RE: "STAR" & Bio
Aug 27th 2002
84
RE: post your best piece here!
Aug 27th 2002
85
today's..that day
Aug 28th 2002
86
black water.
Aug 28th 2002
87
so amazin
Aug 28th 2002
88
RE: post your best piece here!
Aug 28th 2002
89
for the hell of it
Aug 28th 2002
90
Here's mine
Aug 29th 2002
91
END!
Aug 29th 2002
92

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