22. "RE: SYSTEMATICAL SUCCESSION/OPPRESSION'S ECHO....." In response to In response to 0
eye ain't been around for a while (except for the tourney) and this was the first piece eye've read...it made me glad to be back...seems like you have really matured over such a small stretch of time...this was a really dope drop...
at first the piece seemed a little cliche...a lot of topics that have been done to death but this piece brought them some new life...it read really well too...it's obvious that this is in a poetic format...but eye think with a little tweeking you could flip this into a killer rap...reminded me a lot of kweli while eye was reading it (no eye'm not referring to optimas i.r.'s first screen name)...
one helluva drop...tight "transform to go against the norm" syllabicdionysus
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