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43. "overall girl: isn't that how it starts"
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she was sitting at a picnic table
she wore overalls
and she struck me as exceptional.
she pulled me in like a wind tunnel
spoke like a matter of fact battering ram
and her smile sang songs of wow.

see, i don’t talk about girls too much like this
but first impressions don’t often leave me
far from speechless
and this may be romanticized
but isn’t that
how romance starts
an electric slide of the heart
beating to beat the band

a brush of her hand
when yr too close for discomfort
a brand spankin new canvas
that u can’t color by numbers

and so i stumbled like a stammer
i made it all up on the spot
i don’t know whether she cared or not
but i felt words about new futures
just aching to spill out

time to
chill
out
must
breathe
in

original sin dripping off of her like liquid laughter
and i don’t know what i’m after
or even where she’s at
but i’m happy to have even half
of the brand of musish music she’s plunked out
on the keys to my heart-to-heart talkbox.

in short
she rocks
like stones rolling
like sex pistols
like the who
who is she to shake me into bliss
even my acquired west coast sensibilities
never gave me the abilities
to handle aftershocks like this.

she rocks
like
kiss
planted on cheek
i am knocked into next weak in the knees.
she’s
just sitting there
an overall good woman
looking good in overalls

i need an overhaul
a revision
a second opinion
a remix

my coming apart at what it seems
may not be for the squeamish

but i mean this.
i do.
i can’t help it.
she was a love poem at first sight
and i had to run home and tell it.

and that’s why i let her do this to me.
it’s outward praise of inner beauty.
it’s a chance to express the bashfully unmentionable.
and i do it because
she sat at a picnic table
she wore overalls
and she
was exceptional.



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"You Sensitive Bastard", Rob Sturma's latest book of poems, is available directly from the author. It's a pretty book with a real ISBN number and everything.

www.myspace.com/robsturma

  

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LOVE - Cypher [View all] , MUSE, Thu Jul-31-03 08:32 AM
 
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*Speechless
Jul 31st 2003
1
RE: *Speechless
Aug 06th 2003
34
hi....
Jul 31st 2003
2
and if...
Jul 31st 2003
4
      RE: but what if...
Aug 08th 2003
41
           now...
Aug 13th 2003
53
RE: LOVE - Cypher
Jul 31st 2003
3
amen, robyn...
Aug 13th 2003
46
on love.
Jul 31st 2003
5
i was pretty much with you
Aug 04th 2003
21
RE: on love.
Aug 13th 2003
47
RE: LOVE - Cypher
Jul 31st 2003
6
love hiaku
Jul 31st 2003
7
love journal insert #5
Jul 31st 2003
8
RE: love journal insert #5
Jul 31st 2003
10
RE: love journal insert #5
Aug 04th 2003
22
RE: love journal insert #5
Aug 13th 2003
50
RE: love hiaku
Aug 13th 2003
49
priceless breath...
Aug 13th 2003
48
RE: LOVE - Cypher: Feeling the Intensity
Jul 31st 2003
9
RE: LOVE - Cypher: Feeling the Intensity: Connected
Aug 08th 2003
39
      RE: LOVE - Cypher: Feeling the Intensity: Eye See
Aug 12th 2003
44
           RE: LOVE - Cypher: Feeling the Intensity: Eye's See
Aug 30th 2003
60
the toy
Jul 31st 2003
11
RE: the toy
Jul 31st 2003
12
RE: the toy
Jul 31st 2003
14
the toy: interpreted
Aug 04th 2003
23
and some toys just play better
Aug 04th 2003
24
oh my lord
Aug 05th 2003
30
RE: MUSE: Love Cypher
Jul 31st 2003
13
Love is....
Jul 31st 2003
15
RE: LOVE - Cypher
Jul 31st 2003
16
RE: LOVE - Cypher
Aug 01st 2003
17
RE: LOVE - Cypher: Recycled
Aug 04th 2003
18
RE: LOVE - Cypher: Recycled
Aug 04th 2003
19
      RE: LOVE - Cypher: Recycled
Aug 04th 2003
20
the shit
Aug 04th 2003
25
RE: LOVE - Cypher
Aug 05th 2003
26
love.. not the way i had
Aug 05th 2003
27
RE: LOVE - Cypher
Aug 05th 2003
28
2nd grade
Aug 05th 2003
29
RE: 2nd grade
Aug 05th 2003
32
RE: LOVE - Cypher
Aug 05th 2003
31
Postiviteeezzy
Aug 05th 2003
33
my intention
Aug 07th 2003
35
h2o
Aug 07th 2003
36
my dear...
Aug 07th 2003
37
RE: my dear...
Aug 08th 2003
38
it is what it is...
Aug 08th 2003
40
mi amor
Aug 11th 2003
42
RE: overall girl: isn't that how it starts
Aug 12th 2003
45
*A Sukka 4 Love...*
Aug 13th 2003
51
^
Sep 04th 2003
61
couldn't
Aug 13th 2003
52
RE: LOVE - Cypher
Aug 14th 2003
54
RE: LOVE - Cypher
Aug 15th 2003
55
not a poem, just love.
Aug 17th 2003
56
^
Aug 22nd 2003
57
intertwining
Aug 23rd 2003
58
i thought
Aug 27th 2003
59
uppin
Sep 10th 2003
62

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