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1. "i'd trade heaven to feel that weight again"
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Tue Aug-26-03 05:09 PM

  

          

& i'm sure that god will understand...

wow.. great ending lines trace... but.. ahem..

i closed my eyes & tried to paint for him--for us--a portrait more beautiful than the moments we shared, but i was fooling myself. my words were heavy, pregnant with trust and longing and smiling and love and memory, and beauty, of course, but believe me when i say that there are no words bright or gray enough, no brush loud or soft enough to surpass or even equal the passion we painted w/ our sighs. none.

"our legs," i said.

i didn't have to say anything more, because he felt exactly what i meant and agreed, but i continued on, twisting my own legs as i remembered his entwined with them, tangled & glossed with sweat; we were so close. i imagine that it wld have been hard to wedge a breath too large between he & i as we lay, moving against each other, with each other, for each other. we must have been a sight; someone's foot pressed into someone's thigh, an ankle here, a calf there. a knee lolling lazily to the left, toes dancing at the right. yarn. two long strands of teasing brown and soft russet yarn praying into each other's mouths w/ evrykiss exchanged.



up there is where it was for me. I thought the prose approach fit perfectly well.. there could be no other way for this. actually... definitely digging.. your words here.. Glad to see you.. writing again. Peacers~




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love is your name....
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untitled (legs) [View all] , HottLykeFiyah, Tue Aug-26-03 04:08 PM
 
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you, my friend
Aug 27th 2003
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This just reminds me.....
Aug 27th 2003
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wow
Aug 27th 2003
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Good stuff
Aug 27th 2003
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RE: untitled (legs)
Aug 27th 2003
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co-sign
Aug 27th 2003
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      RE: co-sign
Aug 28th 2003
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ARCHIVSMO
Aug 28th 2003
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!
Aug 29th 2003
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LMAO!
Aug 29th 2003
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RE: untitled (legs)
Aug 29th 2003
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RE: untitled (legs)
Aug 29th 2003
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RE: untitled (legs)
Aug 29th 2003
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RE: untitled (legs)
Sep 02nd 2003
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adventurous...
Sep 05th 2003
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Hmmm
Sep 05th 2003
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RE: untitled (legs)
Sep 05th 2003
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on the front lines
Sep 08th 2003
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my poem
Sep 05th 2003
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Archive --
Sep 11th 2003
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I'll leave it up.....
Sep 11th 2003
22
      how the frigg did I miss this...
Sep 11th 2003
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i first read this when you posted in GD
Sep 11th 2003
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RE: untitled (legs)
Sep 16th 2003
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