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MiracleRic
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7. "RE: the bitch"
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i like this for the most part

this line grated against me the wrong way tho for some reason:
"& love never hurt nobody
as long as it’s the real thing"

this was a somewhat simple vent-styled piece, but it still managed to be insightful, the sexual imagery almost threw me off at first, u touched on the idea again with the whisper/nakedness line, it had a shock and awe feel, lol, nice piece

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the bitch [View all] , humblemumble, Fri Mar-11-05 01:39 PM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
i agree it cld use some
Mar 11th 2005
1
this line holds truth:
Mar 12th 2005
2
& love never hurt nobody
Mar 12th 2005
3
Oldie But Goodie ...
May 09th 2005
4
archive!....
May 09th 2005
5
^^^^^^^^^^^
May 10th 2005
6
think im gonna have to inbox the mods....
May 14th 2005
8
yes, let us
Jul 25th 2005
10
RE: the bitch
May 14th 2005
9
RE: the bitch
Jul 25th 2005
11

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