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1. "In Your Own Words (EXAMPLE)"
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Obviouls many of the post these lines were taken from have fallen off the board, but you get the point...

This was made up by taking a line from almost everyone who had a current post at the time. Thus the words in this piece are not mine…but actually yours….I just used them to paint a picture… I put the names of the authors in ( ) beside each line. I did not get to use everyone, but almost. Check it out & tell me what ya think!
IN YOUR OWN WORDS

Remember my name (3rdi)
LISTEN TO ME...D/L ME...LOVE ME (Ricochet)
im the hypocratic hypocrit healer (jayare214)
one of the first to blend that (blak_Yukon)
grandiose pain with a pen (Ezzsential)
enough to stir your fantasies and move your imagination (Natalie)

i grew up much the same as every other cat dealing with the friction (WILDOUT)
my soul is forever blind to limelight (k_rockah)
Now splender is the occasion of love (Chaste_Souls)
over extending your welcome (BarTek)
that you were kind enough to share (Spread)

i'm sick of this (otto)
Is there any solution to being lonely (Sage)
Do you know of any? If so, can you post em please? (illmeta)
Feeling this way for a reason (deepthought74)

Behind the words a battered soul (HannahTall)
Like every sad song that ever was (lunaeco)
You might here this and cry but I don't care (TheProdigiousPoet)
meddle hearts with metal barriers (MiracleRic)
Listen not to whimpers of madness, (shybutcurious)
I would elaborate. But (scholar)
No good can come of this (Nowachaoticthing)

I wrote this poem for this minute………. (Nikky Nak)
i dont know i just wanted to put something in writing cause (harmoni_representative_002)
I breathe through their existence (eyo)
I gave myself permission to go inside (mindful)
a place where even the smoke is dirty and inconsiderate (InspiredFree)
where the knees bend (Morehouse)
holding my palms open (masego de jah)
in dangerous spots and positions is where you will find (HavoK07)
many echoes are screaming me to leave (presyzion)
Yet my third eye says I aint (sun_das_ill)
The rest is just a blur (LunchBox)
Faces and names and dates escape me (Mahogany5952)

the music reminds me (lunaeco)
Together we make sadness sound like harmony (Hartford_Locura)
flipping pages different chapters from tears
to laughter to shouts form whispers truths (rukudzo)
until your throat bursts (HardGroove)
then the directions splinter (gsquared)
but i feel like there is clarity in all this madness. (melchizedek)
balance, space, and time redundant companions of respect (nappiness)

Time to shine on now. (bluetiger)
With no fears, i make that split decision, to do anything i can (cyberwulf)
dancing around in circles and steppin light (robynwildchild)
sketching designs of my desire helplessly (Sober)
Hope my life and future get better with time (Quest4Knowledge)
But, I refuse to harp a requiem within (soulchild)
Memory seldom replaces vision, and I (BarefootAquarian)
Just wanted you to see how rollin' & elevating above the norm really feels (PhotoSynthesis)
-© 2004 All Of The Above Player's


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March COTM: In Your Own Words..... [View all] , KnowOne, Sun Feb-29-04 07:32 PM
 
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RE: In Your Own Words (EXAMPLE)
Feb 29th 2004
2
yup....
Mar 01st 2004
3
      RE: yup....
Mar 02nd 2004
12
WoW! Very
Mar 02nd 2004
9
Question
Mar 01st 2004
4
hmm.....
Mar 01st 2004
6
RE: March COTM: In Your Own Words.....
Mar 01st 2004
5
i'm famous...lol..
Mar 02nd 2004
7
RE: March COTM: In Your Own Words.....
Mar 03rd 2004
13
RE: March COTM: In Your Own Words.....
Mar 25th 2004
43
RE: March COTM: In Your Own Words.....
Mar 02nd 2004
8
the..
Mar 24th 2004
38
Are you listening, My Son? (in your own words...)
Mar 02nd 2004
10
ay soulchild this one was nice. n/m
Mar 02nd 2004
11
ah man...
Mar 03rd 2004
14
how long
Mar 03rd 2004
15
took a little bit
Mar 03rd 2004
16
Next "Artist Of The Month"?!?
Mar 03rd 2004
17
RE: Are you listening, My Son? (in your own words...)
Mar 06th 2004
21
that was hot
Mar 10th 2004
24
amazing....
Mar 24th 2004
39
True Stories
Mar 03rd 2004
18
this sounds ill on the
Mar 03rd 2004
19
I'M DIGGIN THIS!!!
Mar 05th 2004
20
desire seeks its own release
Mar 08th 2004
22
RE: desire seeks its own release
Mar 08th 2004
23
RE: desire seeks its own release
Mar 10th 2004
25
short yet...
Mar 24th 2004
37
RE: desire seeks its own release
Mar 25th 2004
44
dredging the archives
Mar 12th 2004
26
RE: dredging the archives
Mar 15th 2004
27
RE: dredging the archives
Mar 15th 2004
28
RE: dredging the archives
Mar 25th 2004
41
We Dance Forever...
Mar 15th 2004
29
RE: We Dance Forever...
Mar 16th 2004
32
last words
Mar 16th 2004
30
RE: last words
Mar 16th 2004
31
      Back4More
Mar 17th 2004
33
A Complex situation
Mar 17th 2004
34
RE: A Complex situation
Mar 17th 2004
35
      CoSign
Mar 24th 2004
36
the perfect piece....
Mar 25th 2004
40
RE: the perfect piece....
Mar 25th 2004
42
from the mind of blak_yukon
Mar 31st 2004
45
dbg's on some ish too
Mar 31st 2004
46

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