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93550, yearning
Posted by Morehouse, Wed Feb-25-15 01:16 PM
so fixated am i on the swell
of pheromone and indica
haze you've got me under
my toes dug deep
in the quicksand of
anticipation,
i find it hard to remember
your name,
until i call it
uncontrollably
dripping from my lips
onto your
heart skipped
a beat
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93583, well damn!
Posted by ThaAnthology, Fri Mar-20-15 12:28 PM
excellent visuals... I really dug the pacing too!
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93601, RE: yearning
Posted by HueyNewton, Sat Mar-28-15 03:01 PM
good 2 see ur stiLL doin' ya thing Morehouse! Nice one!
across 110th street
-xxx
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93652, you almost never disappoint
Posted by iammindful, Mon Jun-01-15 07:12 PM
seriously...
"my toes dug deep
in the quicksand of
anticipation,
i find it hard to remember
your name,
until i call it
uncontrollably
dripping from my lips"
It's good to log in and see you're still writing with a passion that inspires others. I dug this.
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