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92955, Attachments
Posted by Clouds, Wed Dec-04-13 10:27 PM
She heard my presence requested
then after much thought and introspection
..concluded that he to real to be tested
they dont note the progression
did notice the impression of depression
and they guessin that im stressed be the perception
caught up in misdirection
hate u misunderstood that like a lesson
could confine the blind to fall behind in essence
real love is revolution I make every rhyme a reverand
What I write for you in tiiime
this just how my mind express it
I rose from the dreead in fear of my ressurection
now im back
beatufiul as a rose sent out of heaven
from black
to beautiful and I chose to be a blessing
and thats
a beautiful thought in prose from my perspective
attached
4 u to note
that its fact
without a question
how I make love from scratch
relax u in the message

attached
for you to know
it as truth
no need for testin
that he make love from scratch
relax u in the message
92957, RE: Attachments
Posted by ASIEM, Tue Dec-10-13 04:26 AM
yes this is great perspective given much introspection emitting a spiritual elevation leading one to higher interpretation regarding the heart as love transcribes the manifestation of another transformation giving Hope dedication cause today its the "Attachments" that hold the message...

well written i likes the feel i get from reading this look forward to more
92994, RE: Attachments
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Wed Jan-01-14 04:45 PM
"How I make love from scratch
relax you in the message"

This I likes. The repetition of those lines to end the piece had me thinking that I should re-read the entire thing with a different mind inflection. Yes, I think I will.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.