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92893, "Simply Love III" Posted by lola1980, Mon Sep-23-13 12:46 PM
Come into my garden and rest with me While the dew is still clinging to the loins of my fruit And the coolness of the morning air snaps at your nose
Come into my garden and gaze with me While the dawn slowly rises to meet the clouds And creatures of the dark make their way underground
Come into my garden on the first day of autumn While my heart and eyes blaze like summer And welcome your earthy scent
Come into my garden and plant beside me Seeds that bear beautiful seedlings And our patience times love creates an abundant harvest to share
Desta
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92895, RE: "Simply Love III" Posted by The_Rebellion, Mon Sep-23-13 10:35 PM
I love this, one thing I love about reading poetry is when it depicts nature and gives you the visuals in your mind. I interpret that into my own work as well. Can't wait to see more :)
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