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Topic subjectI mint you ....
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88969, I mint you ....
Posted by candyjarre, Mon Jun-13-11 08:49 PM
Time away
left me
many sleepless
nights of

thoughts scattered
like the stars
in heavens realm

why can't superwoman
be real when I miss you
so I can fly to you when I
feel you thinking about me
as we both expressed
in many ways

and why do we know when?....telepathy is a myth they say

I know you will never
find me here, but

reality slaps me
and your existence
of us being apart

yet together maybe
it's time to
88970, RE: I mint you ....
Posted by Dragon Fly, Mon Jun-13-11 10:09 PM
I felt the emotion in this. I liked the simplicity for the subject matter. Just seemed to make sense the way you wrote it. Thanks for sharing.
89000, RE: I mint you ....
Posted by candyjarre, Fri Jun-17-11 04:12 PM
thankyou for taking the time out to read and I'm glad you can understand it.
89176, RE: I mint you ....
Posted by soulsugar, Wed Jul-13-11 06:01 AM
yum freshness
mint breezes
form your
type coolness
89338, RE: I mint you ....
Posted by Sherry Von, Sat Aug-06-11 08:54 PM
relaxed mind
sleeps, be a bear
in hibernation

no worries
89367, I NEVER mint you
Posted by Babynoon, Mon Aug-08-11 11:50 PM
period (.)