swimming in rats and debt
preyed upon for finance's flesh
found unworthy of mercy modification
manipulated with no fear of litigation

"they are coming at 6 am.
turn over your keys and vacate.
your home is now a house
and a house is only an asset,
and assets must be sold-
as was yours to the highest bidder."

treading a flood of shame and guilt
their breath remains synchronized.
parental focus remains united.
Home's Don't make families,
Families make homes.
As this family always has and always will.

warnings unheeded pleas un - pleaded
the daze of this day approaches in blur
is it all really over?
"is this the last time that I.... in our house?"
no time for sentimentality....
they'll be here at 6 am.

tomorrow's dawn will be
the first light of a new life
for a family so hastily removed from their old.
But the twilight hours -
amid the rustling of exhausted children
shuffling boxes will be
the realm for resolved faces
of a family moving on.

scram a scam a battling ram
charging the door
since i arrive i've became poor
you called this home sure?
why have i been ignored
do you remember me?
what is thy name?
i use to go postal boastful
i am what i am
the lord your god's most high
i remain getting high
and i thought i just dew drop in and say high
now keep it short and fly

nice line though it hit home

Home's Don't make families,
Families make homes.
As this family always has and always will.

i bless you like a father blesses his oldest
is that love?

good lookin out homey... i aint been around for a minute, but its good creating and collaborating with the word....keep em coming folk....

good to see you came back home
and enjoy
but the women here are dirty?
freaky ready to commit
to adultery
feel me just jump right in
good start

stay up bro
but watch out for the ho called
nina storm white tiger
grannies panties apple pie
taste it it's 2 die for

haha

granniesapplespanties
or pastries? dragontails
between his chestnuts you're
the brightest
ho everseen

why is it you pick on
that old lady?she's
dried to powder
a dust in flesh

you're a mean ugly man
living in a wooden shack

dreaming of eating that womans pies? sad

man and eye thought you were a harmless

pimpdriver.

haha

granniesapplespanties
or pastries? dragontails
between his chestnuts you're
the brightest
ho everseen

why is it you pick on
that old lady?she's
dried to powder
a dust in flesh

you're a mean ugly man
living in a wooden shack

dreaming of eating that womans pies? sad

man and eye thought you were a harmless

pimpdriver.

no homo,right?dt
so explain why youu bendover
in his box
and pulloff a brief
to lettem insert
his daps?

lol
don't you know who grannie? es that's my
grandmother you
stinky dwarf'you'd sniff
mi olde grannie?you're
a perverted sleezebucket.


I shouldve known you from
americas most unwanted listings'big balls are usually prostate cancer or some ish.oh well.

why thanks least i'm not paul
with three different ox names
and what ever you want to call me then call me
yes i'm a ho how did you know because i told you so-whodini

told you dawg these bitches here are stalker bipolar
and drunk off the four local str taking it in the asshole
loving it to death hahahha fucking lamos

sir dragonpuss'e is not for you'
look how you ran in behind Jayere with
your boxers in the air waves'swaying

so girlish
rather me be bye polar'frigid
then bicurious you be the georgie'pulling
pranks

if you feel me dreaming I sucked your pinky it was your man on it while you were sleep'
wake up when you feel that and you think of me'wanting me to, but not my type

Here I came to read a poets drop and found you beat me to it'found your hand in his briefs jackin him hard'with "yo sun thes girls is stalking and bipolarish"

you were the first to be on it
so calm your tits and leave Jayere str8 he's
not here to date you either.

lol

put your poms poms down
you are the biggest freak we've seen
In here'bothways and spicey.flammin.

seen your boy annd you got so excited'your a puss'e.

child's play
yes i see behind jay's b
and found a gay
west call it coast
you boast
a friend to the host
moving
your ass on a pole
with my pinky in your asshole
roll on
booty shaking
you must be mistaken
acting like a jamacian dude
with
blood clots
you ain't hot

keep playing your role
you just mad because i didn't reply to you
and as far as all your aka's
wait the days when placed behind bars
bricked up bitch is nuts
slobbering all over my nuts
and swore by god's grace it has guts
butt what ever

i'm waiting to shine the light on your darkness
you been made now you soon will be slayed
move if you going to move if not stay the hell out my way
if you think i'm gay then keep it to your self
if i think you a boy with a crew cut call them shitz your stank ass family i'll keep it to my self
stop following me around post shit about me
and i will not post shit about you
for real you need to grow up
if you married then go suck a dick
and stay the fuck off mine

and

ps.

Jayere:

I feel what you wrote and the realization that what you had or became use to has come to an end'yes

I feel the same thing

thanx for sharing

ps:no disrespect to you by writing about non sense to the other person in here, but he's my enemy. I will ignore.

two minute brother
passing the hook up
to jr.

gone with your
little pickle

and your head is swole

the one's who boast are
always your size
smaller than the advertisement

if this makes you feel like a giant kong
speak it, but eye know the truth lollll

hahaha
Jayere can't help you

god may have cursed you with that birth defect
pray to the right god the next time cause you are in critical shape there.

ps: please send me no more pictures of you d'angelo untitled vid'for im tempted to post it somewhere.

Its beena while but responses to work has degenerated into bad battle raps> is this like a post apocalyptic version of the boards I used to be hooked on? oh well they say you cant go home again....thanks to all who read, and Im thankful to the creator for the muse to create again...

but nukkas dont get it twisted
like a wimpy kids niplles
shrivel ya text drivel as it leaves pencil
i am alpha and omega of spittin
rippin writtens since most ya cill-rens was sippin tit and
DO know that its more than keystyle
I got albums yall lucky to muster a couple of smiles
fuckin with dick jokes that the new okay style
you reach around nukkas lubed up n a pile
okay ill sizzle you fizzle ya brain tissue when you view
what I wrote is dismissing you like flegm from my throat
step ya game up yall swinglin from pubes swallow goo
and with my poet hat im still a harder emcee than you!!!

heheh... oh yeah i deos that too...

See grandma wanna show you nukkus something
So you wanna be famous?.... (playing "successful" by trey & drake, in the background)
First you have to bend over then suck a red dick, take an oath, but you suck' addict poles n crack pipes couldn't pay your rent so you got'Evicted.



smh
thanks for
finding a new
home here
with open arms
we welcome you

let grandma cook you up a good meal.

shit is wack......

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"shit is wack......"

my music group:
http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no



PSH: If you knew your shit was wack why even put it out there like that. lol

Peace Junior

I still cant figure out what the fuck is wrong with you.... read your posts...you obviously arent a writer artist, spitter or talented person in any dimension, yet ive somehow become your muse.... interesting....

look grandmassstankyanus

put up or shut up.... I ceeate do shows and the world is welcome to judge me. you hide behund an alias, and allow jealousy and cowardice to consume you.... post elsewhere or post artistically....

> Reply # 12
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> "shit is wack......"
>
>my music group:
>http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
>http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
>http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
>http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush
>
>My beats:
>www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson
>
>http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no
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>
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>PSH: If you knew your shit was wack why even put it out there
>like that. lol
>
>Peace Junior
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shuffling about, packing to leave, but not quite ready to do so. I could see the authorities and their small lips stating their it's time to gos and so on. I think you painted a wonderful picture of a horrible thing that happens. Losing a house that was once a home and having to move on w/o much to go on has got to be a fucked up way of life. Even if it is temporary... Welcome back...

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yo! I was about to quit on these boards...thanks for the read fam!!!! this was based on a real sitch with my homeboy last 2-3 weeks... I watched them go from confused and lost to united and focused, and it gave me gas to write.... havent had that since prolly the last time i read one of your insightful thoughtful responses. (yeah its been that long! LOL)

Seeing that you are still here gives me hope that this is still a cool place to express...

without passion you'd settle for being still
and you have passion in many ways.

if this is about you may you continue to keep your head up.

i appreciate the words and thoughts...its not me, its a homeboy...i was blessed to be able to help with moving and other things. I was reminded of what family is and how the unt can withstand anything if the love and trsut are strong...

PS the family is in a bigger house in a better neighborhood with better schools... win win...

>without passion you'd settle for being still
>and you have passion in many ways.
>
>if this is about you may you continue to keep your head up.

I've dipped out on the late night move creep at least once myself... Great peace Jay!

good to hear from you ant and thanks for the words bro...