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Topic subject | The last poem of 2010 |
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87397, The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Sat Jan-15-11 01:49 AM
I want to meet and to love all the little children who live inside you the little souls of you who exist in shadows and shades of meanings and absences
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87402, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Sat Jan-15-11 12:28 PM
I want to know them shake their hands and treat their wounds when they fall I want to offer them the bounty of the sky: cloud, eclipse, star, wind, and moonlight to the hands of those little sweet people who form the spine the cranium of your psychic body
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87409, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by ASIEM, Sat Jan-15-11 08:03 PM
waking in the light of 2011 finds this heart and mind grateful great peace 'sage'
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87414, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Sun Jan-16-11 12:52 PM
and when singers wearing summer hats bound through rustic high grasses in fields plucking the daisies and marigolds i want to wear your smile on my sleeve and kiss you goodnight under the crush of the beaming sun
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87419, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Mon Jan-17-11 11:07 AM
your angel-black hair carnation-hued lips your face majestic elicit ruminations from the poet like the distant peaks
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87432, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Tue Jan-18-11 09:34 PM
you could stare down a dragon fierce and frightful with your diamond-flavored eyes sparkling bubbles of champagne the light emitting from your core flying from your eyes like sparks
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87451, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Thu Jan-20-11 09:45 PM
I want to place my ear to your heart and listen to it beat all night
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87452, Naute Stalkin You: Tellin you how... Posted by Babynoon, Fri Jan-21-11 11:59 AM
I'd 'Follow' you on purpose if you forever write this way
Is though I found a peace of heaven and the devil no longer existed
Soft and comforting read
thankyou from now until.......in fi nite memoirs of this momentos.
Life you.
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87454, RE: Naute Stalkin You: Tellin you how... Posted by ASIEM, Fri Jan-21-11 02:44 PM
figure this i'm with babynoon ur writing here is romantic playful and so very poetic if i were female i'd be smitten lol that said great work maayn
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87456, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Sat Jan-22-11 04:33 AM
the flute and glockenspiel play rainbow-colored music that enshroud your naked aura holding happy tears deceptive mystery tropes
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87466, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Mon Jan-24-11 10:07 AM
my poetry is a dreaming devil shortsighted and sensuous hoping only to grope your hand and perhaps your innerwrist
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87511, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by Babynoon, Sat Jan-29-11 01:35 PM
more and more of you....
confirmation yeah yeah I am officially your fan/gruppie haha
keep her melting here.lol
chocolate sweat
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87543, RE to part 12: The last poem of 2010 Posted by Babynoon, Tue Feb-01-11 10:39 AM
She is trying to take a sip and savor it Truly the strength in mind is wanting bits of your flavor' twinkling at times as you are sure to please in this way having it ready to explode nearing the end.
mas...as you may deliver every other day, month or year she reads.
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87542, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Tue Feb-01-11 02:15 AM
hold my words between your lips for seconds at a time let their flavors mix on your tongue and tickle your palate before gulping them hungrily
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87568, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Wed Feb-02-11 09:15 PM
my words are old men who hide behind shades pretending to play dominoes cards or chess on benches in parks while they silently scheme on swimming the waves of your rambling breasts
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87569, RE: old men behind shades Posted by Babynoon, Wed Feb-02-11 09:23 PM
she breathes......
again in love with word play
you come across sexy
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87625, RE: old men behind shades Posted by soulsugar, Thu Feb-10-11 11:19 AM
I am late
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87624, RE: The last poem of 2010 Posted by UncleClimax, Wed Feb-09-11 11:35 PM
where do you remain hidden in photographs dancing between what the light has captured forever and what shrinks from view as if timid with shame? be enigmatic be desired be the wished for the dreamed after the lone star that blinks and disappears within the breadth a whisper before it dies
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87646, I'd say it's a bittersweet way to end 2010 Posted by mindful, Sat Feb-12-11 05:59 PM
and I admire you for writing this:
all the little children who live inside you the little souls of you who exist in shadows and shades of meanings and absences
brutal honesty at its best...
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87799, RE: The best poem of 2010 Posted by Cocoas Barista, Sun Feb-20-11 08:24 AM
continued...
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