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87397, The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Sat Jan-15-11 01:49 AM
I want to meet
and to love
all the little children who live inside you
the little souls of you who exist in shadows and shades
of meanings and absences
87402, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Sat Jan-15-11 12:28 PM
I want to know them
shake their hands
and treat their wounds when they fall
I want to offer them the bounty of the sky:
cloud, eclipse, star, wind, and moonlight
to the hands of those little sweet people
who form the spine
the cranium of your psychic body
87409, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by ASIEM, Sat Jan-15-11 08:03 PM
waking in the light of 2011 finds this heart and mind grateful great peace 'sage'
87414, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Sun Jan-16-11 12:52 PM
and when singers wearing summer hats
bound through rustic high grasses in fields
plucking the daisies and marigolds
i want to wear your smile on my sleeve
and kiss you goodnight
under the crush of the beaming sun
87419, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Mon Jan-17-11 11:07 AM
your angel-black hair
carnation-hued lips
your face majestic
elicit ruminations from the poet
like the distant peaks
87432, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Tue Jan-18-11 09:34 PM
you could stare down a dragon
fierce and frightful
with your diamond-flavored eyes
sparkling bubbles of champagne
the light emitting from your core
flying from your eyes like sparks
87451, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Thu Jan-20-11 09:45 PM
I want to place my ear to your heart
and listen to it beat all night
87452, Naute Stalkin You: Tellin you how...
Posted by Babynoon, Fri Jan-21-11 11:59 AM
I'd 'Follow' you on purpose if you forever write this way

Is though I found a peace of heaven and the devil no longer existed

Soft and comforting read

thankyou from now until.......in fi nite memoirs of this momentos.


Life you.
87454, RE: Naute Stalkin You: Tellin you how...
Posted by ASIEM, Fri Jan-21-11 02:44 PM
figure this i'm with babynoon ur writing here is romantic playful and so very poetic if i were female i'd be smitten lol that said great work maayn
87456, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Sat Jan-22-11 04:33 AM
the flute
and glockenspiel play
rainbow-colored music
that enshroud your naked aura
holding happy tears
deceptive mystery tropes
87466, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Mon Jan-24-11 10:07 AM
my poetry is a dreaming devil
shortsighted and sensuous
hoping only to grope your hand
and perhaps your innerwrist
87511, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by Babynoon, Sat Jan-29-11 01:35 PM
more and more of you....


confirmation
yeah yeah
I am officially
your fan/gruppie
haha

keep her melting here.lol

chocolate sweat
87543, RE to part 12: The last poem of 2010
Posted by Babynoon, Tue Feb-01-11 10:39 AM
She is trying to take a sip
and savor it
Truly the strength in mind
is wanting bits of your flavor'
twinkling at times
as you are sure to please
in this way
having it ready to explode
nearing the end.


mas...as you may deliver
every other day, month or year
she reads.
87542, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Tue Feb-01-11 02:15 AM
hold my words between your lips
for seconds at a time
let their flavors mix on your tongue
and tickle your palate
before gulping them hungrily
87568, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Wed Feb-02-11 09:15 PM
my words are old men who hide behind
shades pretending to play dominoes
cards or chess on
benches in parks
while they silently scheme
on swimming the waves of your rambling breasts
87569, RE: old men behind shades
Posted by Babynoon, Wed Feb-02-11 09:23 PM
she breathes......


again
in love with
word play

you come across sexy
87625, RE: old men behind shades
Posted by soulsugar, Thu Feb-10-11 11:19 AM
I am late
87624, RE: The last poem of 2010
Posted by UncleClimax, Wed Feb-09-11 11:35 PM
where do you remain hidden in photographs
dancing between what the light has captured forever
and what shrinks from view as if timid with shame?
be enigmatic
be desired
be the wished for
the dreamed after
the lone star
that blinks and disappears
within the breadth a whisper
before it dies
87646, I'd say it's a bittersweet way to end 2010
Posted by mindful, Sat Feb-12-11 05:59 PM
and I admire you for writing this:

all the little children who live inside you
the little souls of you who exist in shadows and shades
of meanings and absences

brutal honesty at its best...

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87799, RE: The best poem of 2010
Posted by Cocoas Barista, Sun Feb-20-11 08:24 AM
continued...