my tan brown walkers
is tired son
never saying never
but weather indicates layers
of socks
no car
long distance
from where I oughta had been already
got my foots hurting son!

scarred
inferred from uneven nyc pavement
much dodging of the beatniks
the lost, and all in between
packs of people
come @ me
at once
if in hard shoes
no problem
slick bottoms of finer shoes
enable one
to spin
on a dime
if need be

and the need be great
around my way
all the lookeeloos
did he give up yet?
is he moving yet?
they really did a number on him, but damn he look the same?

my feet hold me up
by their very strings
Lord already knowing I be wanting to get barefoot
and just post up on my steps son

the weather is changing
soles is hotter than ever
soul intact
dude, a brother's feet hurt
what time is the bus coming?

scarred
inferred from uneven nyc pavement
much dodging of the beatniks
the lost, and all in between
packs of people
come @ me
at once
if in hard shoes
no problem
slick bottoms of finer shoes
enable one
to spin
on a dime
if need be


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This reminded me of the bums that try to "spin" on your dime when they ask for money...great visuals here....

yo otto, word to mom dukes, i swear i need to take breaks from writing my prose..i find that when i do, it comes off way fresher.

thanks for the read through son.

i enjoyed how u used shoes to describe someones emotions
your depictions took me right there with you

nice work!

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thanks kid