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85219, Power of love
Posted by Universadevine, Sun Mar-07-10 12:38 PM
You came and gave me a... higher love
sparked the flame and lit ...my love
provoked/ and inspired .. love
a desired ...love /you required ...love
a spoken and prophetic ... love
soul opened and a mated ...love
you helped me so much... to grow
I wanted so much to let ...you know
but now I gotta let you go
i thank you for the love you showed/
i take you everywhere I go/
inside i see.... our love
our hearts still beat in unison
on this plane/ our meeting a brief stint/ I'm eternally surrendering
for in eternity we'll met again
you said I gotta let you grow/for our dreams to show
by faith.. for years/ i continued in my heart to know/
but now its time to let go/
you taught me to empower ..love
goodbye... my love
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85221, Is this a new melody you're working on?
Posted by mindful, Sun Mar-07-10 03:09 PM
if so, I especially liked the following lines:
a spoken and prophetic ... love
soul opened and a mated ...love
you helped me so much... to grow
I wanted so much to let ...you know
but now I gotta let you go
i thank you for the love you showed/
i take you everywhere I go/
inside i see.... our love
our hearts still beat in unison
on this plane/ our meeting a brief stint/ I'm eternally surrendering
for in eternity we'll met again
*nods* This was sweet and definitely significant of love's power...
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85225, RE: Is this a new melody you're working on?
Posted by Universadevine, Sun Mar-07-10 04:34 PM
Yes it is. I am not much of a singer but,
I'm exploring a new thing..
Maybe, I'll post audio once I'm done
Thanks for reading ma ;)
Chosen me choses you.
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85254, Audio! ... Audio! ... AUDIO!
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Mar-08-10 11:35 PM
*Yes*
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85302, RE: Power of love
Posted by gsquared, Fri Mar-12-10 11:15 PM
This is powerful...like a lotta shit, and I am guilty of this too, the whole thing could be better by smoothing out the parts that aren't as refined as others...some of it is perfect, the emotion and ineffable sharing of feeling is priceless....
"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"
"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm
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85321, RE: Power of love
Posted by the_best_part, Mon Mar-15-10 04:11 PM
when i read this i was thinking it sounds like a song. then i saw your reply about singing and audio.
beautiful.
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