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84119, You mean more than this Posted by WILDOUT, Tue Dec-15-09 03:25 PM
I made a surprise for you so here I'm laying clues In hopes that one day we can laugh about what I will do;
You keep on asking me what's inside those boxes the boxes arent the shape of the gifts that are inside them inside are a few bags godiva chocolates raspberry flavored dark chocolate like the time i asked you to try some you picked it out and when we were walking you got me an ipod that now has over 10,000 hiphop songs 8000 plus reggae tunes, im in love you know me you know me more than anyone that's how it feels now you ate that chocolate and smiled you said it was unbelievable retrievable though so there it is, a box of them plus next to that a bag with some grapefruit body wash smelling too fresh she needs this i think as i walk by, and i stopped by at the spa you know, women only, they were like how do you know to get a gift for her here hmmm i know all too well that the women in my family need relaxation we all do it's due to us, do to us running around to make things happen and you my darling, new years eve have an appointment they call it the works, because it's everything they do and it's for you you mean more then this
I have never been so sure
I have never felt something so solid
In a friend, or a girlfriend
Jacuzzi for the bath and ofcourse a new shower to keep you warm
I'm a do this because as life progresses I've been blessed with such company that it's up to me to show them what it's been what it is I know you feel special already you said you do but I'd give you the world this is just a piece for you said I'd give you the world and every time I speak of you the listener's feel like I'm rich because of how I keep with you Listen you are a queen to me I mean for me, I hope to grow old next to you with Sage and more than that, I hope to find the place we're looking for magic, undefined by basic principals advanced wishes too complex to put here right now at the center their you are
I just wanted you to know how it feels to be the mother of someone so beautiful and still be able to be swept off your feet as you should be You think so much of it I think it's so little how much do we spend daily on ourselves and our company and you are so much more than this you make me joy pour out of me in my smile in my walk in my mind in my food in everything because like vines we grew ontop of eachother and like trees we grow evermore expanding and standing together
oh you will always mean more than this so much more than this so much more than winning a contest to austin texas which is so ridiculously cool i'm still trying to get my head around it things are looking up for everyone around me that's how it should be so many wishes i made so many i guess it takes alot of time for them to catch up when you take so many turns at being the caster of young spells
I want you to know, I do this because I'm sure of you And that is worth, more than your weight in gold More than I could ever give You give me something I want I want to meet you each morning each time I wake up from dreaming no matter what shape i'm in Believe me you have given me the gift of love that they try to sell at christmas believe me you have given me gifts that sheltered me watered me sunned me liberated me and soon you'll have all that is yours that's what we work towards nothing but greatness for you you are my love
and sometimes you need to get more than you want and need you need to be taken away from everything you need to be engraved into anothers heart you need to be given a chair at my table
but you mean more than this
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84283, RE: You mean more than this Posted by Isabella Moon, Sat Dec-26-09 02:23 AM
This felt really good to read Wildout. The closing lines were a perfect end.
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84293, thank you :) Posted by WILDOUT, Sat Dec-26-09 07:42 AM
and happy holidays
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84296, RE: You mean more than this Posted by HueyNewton, Sat Dec-26-09 04:04 PM
lotta emotion up in the buildin' with this piece you did, props!
a decade of struggle -xxx
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84406, RE: You mean more than this Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Sun Jan-03-10 06:58 PM
Rarely has a poem made me cry. I'm tearing up even now and the tears are threatening to spill over...too late...WOW! If people learned to love like that...I have no words. Wild, it's so very beautiful. ~~~~~~~~ When One learns to live without fear, then One cannot be broken.
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