83935, RE: you sunk my battleship Posted by Pit Bull, Tue Dec-08-09 12:44 AM
I don't think I've ever read a poem from you before. Thats my bad. This rolled off the brain from beginning to end. I love the way you flip analogies around, sometimes taking me right where I expect (which is comfortable) and sometimes flip me up on my head like what the fuck just happened.
Its a pleasant balance.
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