bitten by the teeth of she
kept by the pleasure in me
i have tasted blood
so i drink from the chalice often
savoring the flavor with every drop
juices fall freely
here have some
sip it slowly at first
until the palate develops
then return again for more later
an insatiable desire
consumed even burning at times
with passion thirst unquenched
yearning to find balance
i wander less
until the full colored moons waken my beast

As the English would say: *BLOODY GOOD* -- :9


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was so profound with minimal use of words. it sickened me which is a good thing since I love vampire movies but I hate the thought of drinking blood so have to turn away at that point. :-)

imagine the blood as ink would you turn away then?
often enuff we take the essence of life at first just alittle then something happens and an insatiable desire rises that is for those who just can't help themselves and we write no one no thing no oment can escape the fangs the bite the thirst...taste it ahah now indulge yourself>>>>>>>>>write

This here is a tasty fucking brew.


I love the metaphor, the way you phrased, pretty much every part of this little post here. Mmhmm, instant classic.

regarding the imagery... you've managed to paint a rather profound picture using few words...

sip it slowly at first
until the palate develops
then return again for more later
an insatiable desire
consumed even burning at times
with passion thirst unquenched
yearning to find balance
i wander less
until the full colored moons waken my beast

I liked this and the title fits perfectly. peace~

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thanks. wonderful u are to so many i am grateful family

i see messages do cum in stages as does climax "sometimes" even over a course of dayz so many poems so many stages so many stories so many messages so many hints so much....in time we rize elevated from demise even death