Okay ... so transferring ^allladat^ back ova to your writing is a start, right?

Truthfully, I think you ALREADY *know* whatcha need to do, you're just looking for a shortcut -- x( -- (hoping to "hear" something you haven't heard before ... something that's a no~brainer/quick fix) -- :P

But I ain't mad atcha ... 18 yrs. old is still a "TEENAGER" in my book ... you got lots a' time to perfect your skills and get it right.

So here ya go: http://www.thestateofhiphop.com/rap-advice-1.html

http://www.thestateofhiphop.com/hip-hop-music-videos.html

http://www.thestateofhiphop.com/article-03-visitor-02.html

If you're serious about this ... it'll take time ... so just have patience ... and practice, practice, practice.


Come back and throw down what you've learned ... so we can critique it, aaiight? -- :D