The prose seemed to skim along almost leisurely and non-threatening, but once you maneuver to your key points, they hit with the force of a pissed-off stonecutter with bricks in his gloves. This is a very good thing to me.

This part hit me the hardest:

"Now is all there is,
and now is fine, I have more to offer you than
anyone who is here now, and I ask for nothing

beyond the

equity of the moment."

But then again, you are a historically skilled writer, so I should expect jaw-droppers like these.

~~~~~




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- Robert Frost

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