me (as the reader) exactly what I was expecting from the title and the author (a vivid piece of narrative writing that I could enjoy). My favorite lines are below:

Street lights a carnival,
slices of watermelon spit pits at
Italian iced ladies with lipstick that
tastes like Chicklets

Can I love how I want to?
are there limits to the magnet?
Are my heart, my mind, my cock
expiration dated? Now is all there is,
and now is fine, I have more to offer you than
anyone who is here now, and I ask for nothing

beyond the

equity of the moment.


You've always had the *knack* for luring me into your work. This piece was not an exception. Great work, g. *nods*

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