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Topic subjectNavy Persuasion
Topic URLhttp://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=83182
83182, Navy Persuasion
Posted by Isabella Moon, Wed Nov-11-09 05:50 PM
the madness pervasive, invades
seductions of midnight whisper, pierce the submissive sky
gentle breezes of ornate caress, persuade
breaths sultry with passions addictive, rise
crimson kisses soul deep in mellifluous submission, resonate
sips of ripened soul smooth like warm rum, intoxicate
hearts, facilely accommodate the burgeoning fulfillment
glistening dreams, submerge the seams of reality
swelling rhythms, intertwine with fiery urgency
perfect symmetry of saturated emotions and billowy motion, envelop
pleasures thick like lush pina colada, weep
cosmic bursts unsuppressed, overflow
deep beyond sunrise, the seeds of renewal echo
83184, RE: Navy Persuasion
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Nov-11-09 06:31 PM
Regardless of what you write, my eyes tend to gravitate to your sig: "How can you stand right in front of the truth and not see it?" -- which seems to put a perfect closure to your voice.

In any case ... your "Navy Persuasion" has sultry tints of the Blues ... in sky blue, royal blue, slate blue, Navy blue & indigo.


I likes ... :D




83271, RE: Navy Persuasion
Posted by Isabella Moon, Fri Nov-13-09 01:52 PM
Thanks photo...:-)
83241, RE: Navy Persuasion
Posted by HueyNewton, Thu Nov-12-09 02:49 PM
like the direction this piece guided me, quite interesting - {}

lifE imitates art
-xxx
83272, RE: Navy Persuasion
Posted by Isabella Moon, Fri Nov-13-09 01:59 PM
Thanks for reading Huey :-)... BTW, the tag lines in your comments read like thoughts inside your head escaping onto the paper...they always inspire a smile.
83250, RE: Navy Persuasion
Posted by Babynoon, Thu Nov-12-09 08:00 PM
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83273, RE: Navy Persuasion
Posted by Isabella Moon, Fri Nov-13-09 02:00 PM
Thanks for the love Babynoon ;-)