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82388, you know how i can tell when a narrative (i'm trying
Posted by blaksilence, Wed Oct-14-09 10:45 AM
to use mindful's word here. watch me get the definition wrong.)

is strong?

when i'm so caught up in the story that i don't realize that
the author is actually rhyming throughout.

i didn't catch the rhyme scheme until i was near the end.


good story.


p.s.

this read like Shakespearean Maury (Povich) to me

Bitcheth, no you didn'teth and whatnot



pause. i clicked the link after i typed that^^

Lord and Solomon forgive me, but i ain't backspacing