82388, you know how i can tell when a narrative (i'm trying Posted by blaksilence, Wed Oct-14-09 10:45 AM
to use mindful's word here. watch me get the definition wrong.)
is strong?
when i'm so caught up in the story that i don't realize that the author is actually rhyming throughout.
i didn't catch the rhyme scheme until i was near the end.
good story.
p.s.
this read like Shakespearean Maury (Povich) to me
Bitcheth, no you didn'teth and whatnot
pause. i clicked the link after i typed that^^
Lord and Solomon forgive me, but i ain't backspacing
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