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81401, Feline Trippin' ---
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Aug-14-09 06:09 PM
Smoke stacks relax
…as warm brandy tickles taste buds
……too tired to savor temptations’ flavor
I crouch on leather couch
…sensuously sinking
…… into the fabric of flirtation
Relaxation comes slowly
…smoldering in misty rings
……reminiscent of smoke signals
He watches me
...peripherally
Pupils wide
…eyes narrowed at the side
His blinkin’s got me thinkin’
… maybe I should just surrender to his gaze
……Sultry eyes a~glaze
I wink at his pink tongue
... flickering
Snickering … I pick him up and stroke his silky back
… me -- with my Tom & Jerry cocktail / him -- with catnip intact
Yeah, sometimes we be trippin’ hard … me and my kitty cat :P
^Jus' a quickie^
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81404, RE: Feline Trippin' ---
Posted by Lincoln Hawk, Fri Aug-14-09 08:57 PM
haha...i can dig it miss lady...i can dig it...nice visual lil piece right here...always a pleasure with you...peace
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81406, RE: Feline Trippin' ---
Posted by Letothetyrant, Sat Aug-15-09 12:04 AM
>I crouch on leather couch
>…sensuously sinking
I like this line, the way it rolls off ones tongue when its spoke. U do have a way with words madam. Lots of T's, structured technical will not go too deep into that though. but I do like. Keep it up. PEACE.
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81409, RE: Feline Trippin' ---
Posted by deepthought74, Sat Aug-15-09 01:49 PM
Deep digs this Photo...u painting nice visuals and giving me ideas *smiling*...
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81412, RE: Feline Trippin' ---
Posted by Zin, Sun Aug-16-09 10:59 PM
lmao
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81427, RE: Feline Trippin' ---
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Aug-17-09 06:03 PM
Whatchu laffin' at?!? -- x( :+ x(
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81415, Uh oh.... *purrrrs*
Posted by Phenomenality, Mon Aug-17-09 12:29 AM
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<--Starting from ▀ 1.
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81440, RE: Feline Trippin' ---
Posted by HueyNewton, Mon Aug-17-09 09:49 PM
sounds like cocktail time to me, yeah nice picture {*} photo!
think i'LL put some brandy in my chocolate milkshake & enjoy, yep!
hangin' out with the artsy crowd
-xxx
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81496, RE: Feline Trippin' ---
Posted by the_best_part, Fri Aug-21-09 07:53 AM
You are such a talented writer. This is a perfect poem.
Peace
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81742, RE: Feline Trippin' ---
Posted by Decstar, Fri Sep-04-09 10:26 AM
lol
i'm not even goin to say anything.
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