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80074, Won't Even Try To Posted by Pit Bull, Mon May-18-09 07:18 PM
I sting from abrasions and lacerations mixed in with grease and diesel fuel Like blood and water in the United Nations Sticky, like a melted icey pop My skin, white but tan artistically colored with dirt
Now I look like a human zebra
I say these things so you can grasp my state of mind because I wanna tell you some truth of the hated kind
I can't love you, won't even try to You will never get from me ecstacy in its various intracicies and interfaces See, I went through all my internal databases and deleted all of those emotions faces I'm stuck in a variety of places representing a compromise between content and miserable The downs aren't so damn bad without the ups
I have been called a coward, slinking in the shadows, hiding from myself Lurking outside the window to my soul tapping on the glass like a stray branch in a night's wind but it isn't fear that dictates my actions You just don't excite and comfort,
You Don't Challenge Me
I clearly have command and in love I do not want the upper hand I was hoping for more, but...
I can't love you, won't even try to Does it make me sick? dunno... but I know that -I- do.
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80079, RE: Won't Even Try To Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon May-18-09 07:36 PM
Made me wince ... as if in pain ... while reading ^this^ joint -- *ouchie*
*Emotionally/Painfully/Thoughtfully Nice Flow* -- :9
>My skin, white but tan >artistically colored with dirt
So you got that "Farmers Tan" going on, huh boo? -- *chuckles*
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80082, RE: Won't Even Try To Posted by Pit Bull, Mon May-18-09 07:39 PM
"white" as in race "tan" as in, i get sun!
Just describing how amazingly dirty I was from work when I wrote that... damn diesel mechanic gig.
Anyway, thanks for reading.
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80087, RE: Won't Even Try To Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon May-18-09 07:51 PM
"tan" as in, i get sun!
Yep -- that's what a "Farmers Tan" is -- an evenly bronzed tan from being in the sun ... (Not for those who turn RED like lobsters) -- and not from workin' on the farm either! -- :P
I gotcha!
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80088, RE: Won't Even Try To Posted by Pit Bull, Mon May-18-09 08:00 PM
a farmers tan cuts off at the sleeves of your t-shirt, yo. OR possibly at the neck of your beater. This is not my situation.
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80090, RE: Won't Even Try To Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon May-18-09 08:06 PM
You're right -- but some WHITE folks here in Texas use the terminology "Farmers Tan" for just a crisp, brown, all~over tan -- as opposed to those folks who don't "tan" well at all -- and just turn RED all over ... and peel badly! -- :P
But I checked an confirmed ... and like I said: YOU'RE RIGHT! --- *OOoooKAyyyyyy*
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80092, RE: Won't Even Try To Posted by Pit Bull, Mon May-18-09 08:13 PM
see, I learn something new everytime I talk to you.
Like my rhyme? ;)
Its all in fun, lady.
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