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Topic subjectSuspicious Minds
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78508, Suspicious Minds
Posted by empro, Fri Feb-13-09 04:51 AM
My mind won't stop wandering...
I can't eat, I can't sleep

My hands won't stay still.

What's been done? Has the web already been spun?
Is this his will?

The nights a light ignited
What's this affliction...Now a days I'm having a harder time deciphering between what's fact & what's fiction..

Enter the suspicion of my intuition as I load this, and start the ignition...






To Be Continued.

Feel Free to add your own version of the story & how it unfolds too if you feel the need!
78593, RE: Suspicious Minds
Posted by wisdom31, Thu Feb-19-09 02:30 AM
My diction speaks friction because I have lost my conviction
Mental hanging in the balance do I have the permission
To assume that things are going sour because I don't know the mission
Our life is a play and we've just missed the intermission
Get down on knees just to pray for upliftin'
If this doesn't work then temper will start shiftin'
Pulse rate quickenin', hurt hate gettin in
Work wait fixin' him, flirt date mixin' in
These jealous notions I'm havin' have got to be nixed
Or the enemy will continue to play with a mind that's tricked...


Whoever's next in line can continue the thought process
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"A woman's life is love, a man's love is life..."
-----Phonte




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78595, RE: Suspicious Minds
Posted by HueyNewton, Thu Feb-19-09 05:33 PM
I can dig it man . .

less than zero
-xxx
78626, RE: Suspicious Minds
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Feb-25-09 01:36 AM
I'm sure you know ... but you just ain't sayin'
And you're sure suspicious ... but these games you be playin'
Stayin' in the cut tryna catch me on the sly
I ain't doin' shit ... yet you steady askin' WHY?
I tend to think YOU must be the guilty one
Tryna accuse me while you're OUT THERE havin' fun
GTFOH with yo suspicious mind
I'mmma exit with my pride and leave yo ass behind -- :P


^That's^ rust ^UP^ there -- but your writings are still lookin' shiny & bright, Empro! -- *Yep*







78638, Awwh Snap...Photo's back in the trap!!
Posted by empro, Wed Feb-25-09 05:07 PM
About to bless us all with your smooth words eh?

It's been well awaited & long overdue!

Honestly, I'm happy to see ya back on here boo!

Time to get it crackin like a car jackin

:)
78663, RE: Suspicious Minds
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Wed Feb-25-09 10:00 PM
I can't help when I was reading this that song by Mya..."Ridin'."

Suspicious creepin will surely get you more than what you bargained for
Eyes seize the door and unlocks
into the night of sweat-filled sighs
some lies are best kept meaningful
a succession of situations override my mind
got me out here...anger-blind
what...the fuck...ya doing....?
into the car now
eruption...an unsteady fault now
and I'm loaded and cocked
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.
78669, RE: Suspicious Minds
Posted by ASIEM, Wed Feb-25-09 10:31 PM
this is yet another spin on realities prism