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78468, the newness of doubt
Posted by mindful, Sun Feb-08-09 11:44 AM
you can spring up any feeling in me
you want to, yet I will stand-fast
to my belief that I am and will always be
right. you may try to defeat me
w/ your qualms and daily debates
of what is and what was, but I
am and will always be immovable.
you're slick with it though,
that sly smile has no end-point, and I
fall for it every, single time. it is
in your mind that I rest my
thoughts of redemption and ask for
forgiveness for a past you know nothing
of. it is in your heart that I offer
a portion of me and leave my lust
there for a chance to blend with its
very beating. you have questioned my
feelings for you on more than
one occasion and I have praised your
name even in your absence.
yet, you're still jealous. there is nothing
I can do to prove my point and
my hands have grown weary from
fighting you. so, in the midst of
quarrels and side-shows at our dinner
table, I have removed my voice from
your ears, sealed it in an envelope, and
bagged it up for safe-keeping. it is no
longer yours to worship. you try my
patience with your crisp words and
fuck me weekly with under-handedness
and I arise more powerful than God's
great wrath. you are my muse, so terribly
haunting, yet so amazingly fragile. I
live for your faults, they keep me
alive.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
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78481, RE: the newness of doubt
Posted by HueyNewton, Mon Feb-09-09 06:37 PM
ya know the creative process is all about listening, I hear U . .
what if I wanna haircut in the bronx?
-xxx
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78489, powerful closing lines...
Posted by KnowOne, Tue Feb-10-09 01:38 PM
> you try my
>patience with your crisp words and
>fuck me weekly with under-handedness
>and I arise more powerful than God's
>great wrath. you are my muse, so terribly
>haunting, yet so amazingly fragile. I
>live for your faults, they keep me
>alive.
>
nice read....
Keep Flowin' Sis'...
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78497, power stem from the negativity in our lives
Posted by Universadevine, Thu Feb-12-09 01:47 AM
I like how you conveyed this ;)
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78530, thanks you guys for reading
Posted by mindful, Sun Feb-15-09 02:29 PM
and Univers, ha! That's exactly it.
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http://newnessofdoubt.typepad.com
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://www.clutchmagazine.com
Gray hair is
God's graffiti ©Bill Cosby
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79049, RE: the newness of doubt
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Mar-23-09 06:57 PM
I'm just ^UpPiN^ this .... cuz itz good ...
... and I'm tired of tryna find words to say how much I admire & respect your work! -- x(
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79555, RE: the newness of doubt
Posted by ASIEM, Tue Apr-21-09 06:55 AM
a new look on what will always be. yeh doubt, fear all that methane energy is so combustable and powerful just fart and feel the power lmao
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