78298, RE: I. Vixen Posted by empro, Mon Jan-26-09 12:18 PM
>vexes many >removes the velum off your cerebellum >languishing in rhythm's prison >encased in solitary confinement >whispering to words committing verbicide >varacious verbals shut up in my lungs >written sanity on the walls of insane flows >poetically waxing floors with eager content >in your veins IntraVenously pumping with complexity >I. Be prisms distorting mind views readily >crumbling mounds of speech-tacular wit >polishing off your veneer until I consume your psyche >virtually becoming a virtuoso of trapped vernacular >a visionary stealing your tongue >vociferant >avoidance >futile attempt
i liked the very first 3 lines a lot. This flowed nicely and it appears to have a confident rhythm to it. Thanks for sharing with us
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