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Forum nameFreestyle Board
Topic subjectCrash Course
Topic URLhttp://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=7&topic_id=77542
77542, Crash Course
Posted by Zin, Thu Dec-11-08 06:26 PM

My words collide with brains like joy rides that end with the air bags expired …
when the driver survives but the passenger dies …and the eyes
that read this scan with the rapid eye movement
Of the sleeping beauty…
And herb these gap teeth Huckstables ..like rudy
On butterfly wings I begin…and end as a tidal waves …
kinetics multiplied
So I’m your last post times two
And you too …can get taken
With the ignition exposed…
My codes …
live in coed dorms …
something like any and everyone
man or woman …
I chase ‘em like nottyhead …
Split ‘em like O.J.
That’s Orenthal…
Ayo
‘Zin a bad boy poster original …
fuck what I say in the booth I WILL give it to you…
minuscule …
in a matter of mintues
I’ll make my mission …
Menstrual …
And erase dudes like the ends of number 2 pencils …
And give a g4 fuck if I offend you …

77543, RE: Crash Course
Posted by ak_reborn, Thu Dec-11-08 06:29 PM

What can say that you dont always hear?
its just more fire.
77555, RE: Crash Course
Posted by ASIEM, Fri Dec-12-08 12:57 PM
the opening was so potent and seems in another direction then where it went yet your writing often has 'mind bends' that strike rapidly
and changes quickly a style all your own


My words collide with brains like joy rides that end with the air bags expired …
when the driver survives but the passenger dies …and the eyes
that read this scan with the rapid eye movement
77559, RE: Crash Course
Posted by HueyNewton, Fri Dec-12-08 04:11 PM
it's always better to give than receive, yeah cool flow . .

the rhythm of compassion
-xxx
77560, RE: Crash Course
Posted by godsweat, Fri Dec-12-08 04:19 PM
my words...
unbreakable
fracturing frail fakes
trash tossed at snakes that tailgate
my caliber, shell casing
nomenclature of the stock sends them to Hells gate
this is snails pace...
slowed it down
lowered my keystrokes..
you still couldn't hold it down
cats puttin on heirs
still couldn't hold the crown
Phelps of the penship
hold your nose, you drown..
i lapped you
you played yourself...
i didn't have to
nothing to see here
act two...
79299, RE: Crash Course
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Apr-05-09 09:59 AM
godsweat ... you got it goin' on in here too, yaknow? ... ;)


^UP^ for both a' y'all -- *yeahhhh boyz*


77563, RE: Crash Course
Posted by Pit Bull, Fri Dec-12-08 04:30 PM
I like the vocabulary and direction changes here.

Nice.
77766, RE: Crash Course
Posted by Otto, Sat Dec-27-08 02:18 PM
zin, your flows are always a crash course in bad ass flowin...i'm retarted compared to you.
77917, RE: Crash Course
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Sun Jan-04-09 02:55 PM
I knew I was going to come back and have your works contain the same potency as when I left.

My words collide with brains like joy rides that end with the air bags expired …
when the driver survives but the passenger dies …and the eyes
that read this scan with the rapid eye movement
Of the sleeping beauty…

I see me and Asiem both like the above. That right there was extremely and mind pleasing. :)
~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.
78849, There U Go ....
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Mar-08-09 04:36 PM
Flowin' like a mac truck:

>Zin a bad boy poster original …
>fuck what I say in the booth I WILL give it to you…
>minuscule …
>in a matter of mintues
>I’ll make my mission …
>Menstrual …
>And erase dudes like the ends of number 2 pencils …
>And give a g4 fuck if I offend you …


I'm Offended -- :P


Tight Flow Don'tchaknow -- *Yuuup*