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Topic subject{audio} Pimp My Ride (over Dr. Dre's "Pause For Porno") Feedback Pls
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75793, {audio} Pimp My Ride (over Dr. Dre's "Pause For Porno") Feedback Pls
Posted by The Lyric, Thu Jul-17-08 04:42 AM
- File is here: http://www.zshare.net/audio/15470404858041e7/
- (The words in braces) are by another character that I'm also talking to
- Recorded this a few months ago
- I have this challenge for myself, where I want to write a whole verse or song that does not rhyme, but yet, it's hot. I think I unknowingly did that here
- Whatchya'll think?


{verse}
Uh, whooooow!
Damn, I love this beat righ' hurr,
So smooth for gettin' shit off your chest, knahmean?

Sometimes, I come with more corny lines than Xzibit on Pimp My Ride
Speaking of {that show}, my car is fucked up, and it doesn't move
(Not even from point A to point B?) Nah
But I don't need it pimped out
I just need the "Where the cash at? Where the stash at?"
Xzibit, I could save you production cost if instead,
you just sent me a cheque for pimping my car myself (They not gon' go for that)
Then fuck it, Xzibit, pimp my ride (Pleeeeeease?)
And once I get my car back, I will take it to the chop shop myself
Thanks, Pimp My Ride -- Changed my life! How?
Looky here, what I really need pimped out is my studio
This fuckin'/cheap ass mic ain't helpin me
I bought it from WalMart, so I may as well be rapping into a door knob
And that's not gonna help me get my five mics (Naaaah! Really?!?)
Whatchu being sarcastic for? You never seen a struggling artist before?
Dreaming what's commonly referred to as "big pipe dreams"
While drooling over food that they can't afford?
Mo'fuckas, you never heard o' that befo'? Bitches... {hehehehe}