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Topic subjectYou make me feel long.
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75205, You make me feel long.
Posted by marywalsh, Wed Jun-18-08 03:15 AM

Take deep breaths
today and yesterday,
on the plane,
three movies,
one too same.

What’s come over me,
I thought I saw your face
wearing a smile,
dimpled on the side,
tears falling to rest
upon your cheeks.

Like a memory
you’re here for a while
and then you’re gone.
It slips around me,
and tickles me,
wet upon my cheek,
and then you’re gone.

7 days melt into one,
funnel down
into a very small hole,
cylindrical, worm-like,
two heads,
one on each end.

You make me feel long.
75224, Awwwwwww --
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Thu Jun-19-08 05:27 PM
There's something about ^this^ that makes me *smile*.

Words -------- all jumbled ^UP^ like leaves ... together in a pile of poetry.

Feels good to kick around in these words.


*Nice~Ness*





75273, know what makes me feel long?
Posted by I am Nhate N8Backwards, Sun Jun-22-08 02:27 PM
That was sweet, i don't under stand the word long for this, i think sad when io think long but you seem to mean some kind of contentment, it's odd. feels right though. nice stuff. it's pretty and reminds me of lace.








p.s. chicks with tall legs and short torsos and a low cervix.


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75251, i loved the title
Posted by mindful, Sat Jun-21-08 01:11 PM
and the sensual effects your words give off...

favorite lines:

Like a memory
you’re here for a while
and then you’re gone.
It slips around me,
and tickles me,
wet upon my cheek,
and then you’re gone.

7 days melt into one,
funnel down
into a very small hole,
cylindrical, worm-like,
two heads,
one on each end.

definitely digging this. Peace~

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75270, RE: You make me feel long.
Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-22-08 12:32 PM
yeh what they both said...