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Topic subjectRE: Holla Back!
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74936, RE: Holla Back!
Posted by Pit Bull, Mon Jun-09-08 06:51 PM
Finally got around to reading this whole piece...

and I'm certainly not disappointed. Still love the way you write.. even though I have to reread it a few times to follow. Otherwise its like that old movie "And Now For something completely different"

Anyway.. you said add on.. so here goes..



Been a while, I've jumped a few styles
seen and been seen actin' like a child
Put some sneakers on my miles
Caused and fucked up some smiles
done some shots on tuesday and acted wild
But overall as the years go by, why I, I'm pretty mild

Tried to untie knots not forgot united by Zip-Tie's
Reached inside pried at my dark sides as I dip and dive
Recorded and live preach against hard lies
and try to make time to appreciate the sunshine

choppin' up lines of Life to snort
Admitted dork with a shitload of support
Its no surprise, style combo, lyrical spork
Like the Enterprise, I'll go, I'm a musical airport

Easily influenced, but thats good
Clearly a nuisance, never do what I should
Need a music rinse, but whatever..
I do what you'd do if you knew that you could....

kinda wandered on it.. but your piece reminded me of my relationship with okay.. so I started off like that.. and went somewhere else. Either way. Thanks for the piece and the excuse to write some stupid shit, =)