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73519, taboo Posted by ASIEM, Sat Apr-19-08 10:08 AM
i almost squeezed the life out of him again this vicious relationship founded in resentment sometimes rage and fear caught in a maze of deciept a self imposed prison i choked him until he lay there no more strength to fight while i found an unnatural pleasure from attempted murder but it was not me it couldn't be me that liked it one day he showed up I reached out the first time cause he was there and i felt comfort from him yet since then, a struggle it has been to keep myself from this feeling i bury myself in fantasies or when i am with a woman she sometimes makes me forget all about the sordid affair i have with him i don't like knowing this so i have never written a word till now i wanna stop but it is something that burns and i yearn for cause the pain of it feels so good. how do i stop what has become so acceptable now days. i hate this i wanna stop doing it but i always find my way back to him so i write this to remember the moment this moment when i really just want to be normal and stop this i gotta stop i just want to love and be loved like everyone without having to rely on what i get from holding him we are so close and then there are times when i think him to be my worst enemy how do i admit it feels good to choke him to the end of his last breath and then let go just before death? i guess i just said it...now what? does it stop? here he is now i can't resist wait i'll be back later...
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73523, RE: taboo Posted by Purple, Sat Apr-19-08 10:56 AM
ASIEM are you going crazy dawg. back and forth back and forth no offense but please abort, this, crasy turn of events as it unfolds to be your mid-life crisis!
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73531, RE: taboo Posted by ASIEM, Sat Apr-19-08 04:15 PM
wow midlife crisis i wish this been goin on a long time i am just gettin the courage to write about it...check this out all the pieces i have written in here and i think this is the first time i even noticed a hit from you. that says something to me. i am looking for your work now.
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73525, hmmmmm Posted by Ezzsential, Sat Apr-19-08 11:47 AM
interesting peice.. is it addiction?
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73532, RE: hmmmmm Posted by ASIEM, Sat Apr-19-08 04:15 PM
more like an affliction...sup E you aight
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73536, see Posted by Zin, Sat Apr-19-08 04:31 PM
this is crazy cause i my thoughts are you are a male writer ... but this seems to come from a female .... i don't know i'm gonna read it again S
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73550, RE: see Posted by ASIEM, Sat Apr-19-08 07:05 PM
please do and please your words will be much appreciated being male today is as much a struggle as being black oops how bout being black, male and very sexually active now that is a talk piece
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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73551, RE: see Posted by Purple, Sat Apr-19-08 07:11 PM
I've read alot of your owrk actually you're an impressive writer, and thank you for the feedback on my piece!
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73562, penned up emotions Posted by mindful, Sun Apr-20-08 03:37 PM
usually make for the best pieces of work. this is the rawest i've ever seen you get on here:
no more strength to fight while i found an unnatural pleasure from attempted murder but it was not me it couldn't be me that liked it one day he showed up I reached out the first time cause he was there and i felt comfort from him yet since then, a struggle it has been to keep myself from this feeling i bury myself in fantasies or when i am with a woman she sometimes makes me forget all about the sordid affair i have with him i don't like knowing this so i have never written a word till now i wanna stop but it is something that burns and i yearn for cause the pain of it feels so good.
those lines above are what i thought was the *meat* of the poem. maybe you should keep writing it out and then learn to understand and accept what it is you're *going through* if you can. Peace~
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73616, RE: taboo Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Apr-21-08 10:11 PM
I'm kinda having a hard time gettin' a good grasp on this pCe -- :(
The texture of your words feels so gritty and "under~the~skin-like" -- I can't help but try to scratch it -- but I ain't too sure exactly what's makin' me itch! -- *chuckles*
I'm looking at this flow -- with your references to HIM -- like folks look at Hip~Hop and refer to "it" as a HER (or SHE) -- So I'm wondering if the HE/HIM you're referring to here is an actual MALE or if you're using it as an analogy for something else -- *scratches head*
So ....
Are you saying here that you've had a pseudo/semi~homosexual experience ... and it involves that choking move where the person has an orgasm at the point of almost passing out? -- (AND YOU LIKED IT)?
If so ... that's kool -- I'm just asking, so I can get a grip on your focus and understand the text/content better. -- (I'll read it again for clarity)
If not ... then what exactly are you referring to?
Either way ... Don't choke me for asking! -- :9
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73627, i'm back to say a little more Posted by ASIEM, Tue Apr-22-08 10:32 AM
this is not the way i thought things would end but i had to start writing bout this now there is not a moment i don't anticipate it ending no more choking no more numb feelings no more hiding and fantasizing believing one day i will find satisfaction i wonder if anyone else feels like this finding pleasure in something that just don't sit right inside me i mean it feels good but when i think about it i mean really think about it, embarresment, guilt and shame run a collision course with the thought that it is normal for so many yeh i wonder if anyone would really tell the truth it feels like i am gaining relief but fear still has a grip and the idea that i might be considered something i cannot tell myself my conscious won't allow it i am a man, a father, good looking, talented and intelligent some might ask what does that have to do with it? perhaps nothing at all i just wonder why this is a part of me so much apart of me? can someone relate can someone tell me it's really okay to feel so many indifferent feelings that come and go it seems like a trap if i give in when i give in as i give in to the desire the feeling the comfort the familiar damn can somebody relate?
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73994, RE: i'm back to say a little more Posted by ASIEM, Fri May-02-08 09:09 AM
another installment for me...cause it is TABOO
i looked outside myself seeking approval no doubt i glanced in the mirror but found only a reflection the noise, distortion conflicted emotion all looked back at me wondering wandering a maze of make believe puzzeled just for a moment i digress planted seeds still grow no fertile ground no water no affection no culture barren soil deep within a mindfield beneath the turmoil it seemed no life would come from this still like a thin blade of grass through concrete here am i i did it again even after she touched me and made me feel whole, i choked him squeezed and strained till vains popped there in a sullen slumber he lay waiting anticipating me seperated nothing between us but exhaustion i watch fantasizing waiting for him to get back up touching the moist often dispised fluid i sniff, the air pungent yet sweet engulfed in my own madness vulnerable yet gaurded will i ever stop? do i really want too? i get immense gratification from pleasuring him today i found noone outside to relate but today i talked to me and that feels good...
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74221, okay so i have learned something Posted by ASIEM, Tue May-13-08 01:42 AM
there is a little intimidation knowing that i have found a medium to slowly release you from my frontal lobes to find ease from the pain of forgotten claims that come back every time i play with you' tho i have been there with you so many times there is solice close, to find. taboo, yes this is something hidden but known and now that it is becoming shared so often for view i wonder if it will soon be a memory that i can choose not a place of no return once touched crippling me with compulsion after obsessions plea was met granted you stay near me you are me so mucha part of me but so much in control of me that i need to seperate from the strangle hold, the grip, the incessant desire to... yet in healing, in natural affection i will find you my congenital ally but until then i'll choke you with pleasure nowhere in the end...
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74236, RE: taboo Posted by nappiness, Tue May-13-08 05:13 PM
i read yo piece and then read your comments and your added installments. your most poignant statement, "being male today is as much a struggle as being black." this statement brought light to all that you've said. we need to let brothas be brothas and not define that for them, let them define themself. we impose definitions of manhood that are just as misogynistic as the labels and acts upon sistas.
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74248, RE: taboo Posted by ASIEM, Wed May-14-08 07:42 AM
in some veryu real way that is the heart of this thanks for pulling that out I know someone is listening and not afraid to see reality nor face what appears to be 'taboo'
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74291, mayne... Posted by Free2Fly, Thu May-15-08 08:45 AM
release is so good for the soul. That is one area I've had a hard time coming to grips with and letting go. My ego has not allowed me to release and in return let anything in, realizing that this is what keeps us stagnant.
>no more choking no more numb feelings >no more hiding and fantasizing >believing one day i will find satisfaction >i wonder if anyone else feels like this >finding pleasure in something >that just don't sit right inside me
yes i have found pleasure in things that didn't feel right at all within, but continued to stay/do it for the temporary satisfaction but all the while in the inside dying. But as time goes on you do better, you grow...it will get better
>i mean it feels good but when i think about it >i mean really think about it, embarresment, guilt and shame
felt
This was all over the place, but I was still able to relate. Peace & Blessing
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78947, RE: taboo Posted by ASIEM, Sat Mar-14-09 05:13 PM
visiting an obsession even for a moment can raise compulsions grip a vice to hard to break my affliction had been in remission even found hope beneath the breast of a woman still in a flash it seems there the choking began again a lapse revolves arround the silence and the what had passed has risen now... what shall i accept after the birth of another dawn?
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78961, reading for a second time... Posted by Free2Fly, Mon Mar-16-09 10:33 AM
there is a little clarity, and I get what you are saying...so I pose the question do you ever think you will find peace with this taboo subject? How are you handling it?
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79014, RE: reading for a second time... Posted by ASIEM, Sat Mar-21-09 06:38 PM
To be honest about it there is nothing more to say about this except i was hoping someone would clearly ask what am i talking about literally tho this has symbolic and figurative meanings i was simply conveying how masturbation is often "taboo" but really as normal as eating and all other human functions but when fear or embarrassment control us it can be quite an addiction...to answer you i will do it again I am sure lol
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79016, RE: reading for a second time... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Mar-22-09 12:34 AM
>To be honest about it there is nothing more to say about this except >i was hoping someone would clearly ask what am i talking about >literally tho this has symbolic and figurative meanings
Dude ...
Check ^above^ -- #9
I asked for clarity ... (but you never came back and responded) -- :(
Truthfully ... I didn't know masturbation was TABOO anymore?!?!? -- *chuckles* -- :P
But now ... after reading your excerpts over again ... I can see how "masturbation" / "chokin' da chicken" fits right in with your wordplay.
Thanx for revealing the mystery...
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79036, RE: reading for a second time... Posted by ASIEM, Mon Mar-23-09 09:37 AM
i concede u r so right u did ask for clarity...the idea behind taboo is when it becomes the means of satisfaction that was scarry to me at one time keeping it a secret
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79062, RE: taboo Posted by HueyNewton, Tue Mar-24-09 03:12 PM
this was an escapade of emotions with descriptions like here & now! "yo, shit happens"
a decade of excellence -xxx
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