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Topic subjectrunning
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73097, running
Posted by soulsugar, Tue Apr-01-08 03:44 PM
persuade me
sway me
say to me
"you will be fine"
make the times near or far
spend precious time

beside me
say to me
"you were love devine"

my heart was on the line
I left to see if you were the one
I could miss while interrupted by dating a crush,

and it was tuff
I felt ur vibe heating my soul with the sun,
visions of your stare,
gazing through my atoned heart,
breaking down inside
The rush to get home
the rush to call, you

the first word from your breath
"how was it??"

then my soul left to return again
"I tried to see what I've been missing"

you can read me like no other,
im aftaid to fall is why I left.
77144, RE: running
Posted by jayare214, Thu Nov-13-08 06:14 PM
I liked this alot felt alot like an internal dialogue...
77145, Fellin this
Posted by empro, Thu Nov-13-08 06:23 PM
Very Nice all the way through.

Stay ^
77216, RE: Fellin this
Posted by soulsugar, Thu Nov-20-08 04:33 PM
Appreciate the feedback alot
thankyou