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73097, running Posted by soulsugar, Tue Apr-01-08 03:44 PM
persuade me sway me say to me "you will be fine" make the times near or far spend precious time
beside me say to me "you were love devine"
my heart was on the line I left to see if you were the one I could miss while interrupted by dating a crush,
and it was tuff I felt ur vibe heating my soul with the sun, visions of your stare, gazing through my atoned heart, breaking down inside The rush to get home the rush to call, you
the first word from your breath "how was it??"
then my soul left to return again "I tried to see what I've been missing"
you can read me like no other, im aftaid to fall is why I left.
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77144, RE: running Posted by jayare214, Thu Nov-13-08 06:14 PM
I liked this alot felt alot like an internal dialogue...
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77145, Fellin this Posted by empro, Thu Nov-13-08 06:23 PM
Very Nice all the way through.
Stay ^
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77216, RE: Fellin this Posted by soulsugar, Thu Nov-20-08 04:33 PM
Appreciate the feedback alot thankyou
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