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72569, I Still Write ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Mar-05-08 02:10 AM
I still write … Late at night … My fingers gently linger on the fluid pen within Scripting dreams in slivered moonbeams Lavishly dipped in invisible ink I think –- therefore I am -– mindful … Of memories misted with mayhem "Havoc & disorder in a jocular sense" Vents of past hurts and indiscretions But I've learned lessons in hibernation Silent communication raises mental palpitations As brain waves beat to the rhythm of "your" words I read them slowly and *smile* All the while writing in code – Ezzsential~ly stealth mode While Phenomenality abounds in circular sounds The Universadevine winds ribbons of relevance Around fingers that linger on the pen within Babynoon sunrises idolizes evening runs with comet guns Shooting lazer stars through the best part of my nighttime REM I dream in color watching them ………….. *twinkling* Sprinkling shredded words across an inky sky blanketed by ……. Psalms & Proverbs Sacred words that rock me in a cradle of comfort and security It’s sure to be a night of flight akin to Marijane mornings waking up ON HIGH But no cannibus sativa for this ms. mimi diva (at least not today) -- *don’t ask me why* Winter Blazes amazes the timid child in me So I be floatin’ above life’s fire~y trials with whimsical wings that fly Gliding … while riding roller coaster realms of reality I’m a sneak freak~a like Delrica …molesting words subliminally Criminally … All willy~nilly and Robynwildchild~like But my soulchild is innocent and law~abiding Steady fighting those things that go bump in the night So if you’re wondering -- if I stopped writing The answer is NO / My pen is leaking but I still got a lil' flow *Photo takes out pen & pad – And turns up the light*
*Dusty & Rusty*
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72570, This made me smile Posted by ThaAnthology, Wed Mar-05-08 01:38 PM
and as always, I'm sincerely joyous because "You Still Write!"
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72602, RE: This made me smile Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-08-08 04:27 PM
Thank you kindly, sir! -- :9
And you have a beautiful smile -- ;)
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72571, Fresh!! Posted by Universadevine, Wed Mar-05-08 07:28 PM
Now that's what the board been missin I like how you added peeps names in stay pennin:)
"But I've learned lessons in hibernation Silent communication raises mental palpitations" -True say
Blessings!
Now to get Intrepid Vixen to start posting again
www.myspace.com/dovefly
"Above all things guard your heart for it is the wellspring of life "—Proverbs 4:23
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72603, Ooooppsss... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-08-08 04:31 PM
>Now to get Intrepid Vixen to start posting again
She gon'kill me -- I neglected to stick "her" in da mixxx -- x( ;( x( -- *my bad*
~Next Time~
(I knew I was 4~getting somebody -- *maybe more than one somebody*)
But thanks for your unconditional love, support & acknowledgement -- *Much Appreciated*
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72573, YEAY!!! I'm so glad I came in here tonight! Posted by Phenomenality, Thu Mar-06-08 01:04 AM
you are the SHEIT, MA!!! lol. you *are* pure fluidity, sensual sound, liquid movement.. love, love, LOVE your style. your signature style. unique and perfect in your contributions.
and what a tribute to the (perhaps) virtual, yet profound bond between us all.. energies congregating here and there across this globe connected by the collective consciousness of this particular mile marker on the superhighway..
fabulous. THANK YOU. (and im beyond honored.)
and you nailed us, too! *wink*
>I still write … >Late at night … >My fingers gently linger on the fluid pen within >Scripting dreams in slivered moonbeams >Lavishly dipped in invisible ink >I think –- therefore I am -– mindful … >Of memories misted with mayhem >"Havoc & disorder in a jocular sense" >Vents of past hurts and indiscretions >But I've learned lessons in hibernation >Silent communication raises mental palpitations >As brain waves beat to the rhythm of "your" words >I read them slowly and *smile* >All the while writing in code – Ezzsential~ly stealth mode >While Phenomenality abounds in circular sounds >The Universadevine winds ribbons of relevance >Around fingers that linger on the pen within >Babynoon sunrises idolizes evening runs with comet guns >Shooting lazer stars through the best part of my nighttime >REM >I dream in color watching them ………….. *twinkling* >Sprinkling shredded words across an inky sky blanketed by ……. >Psalms & Proverbs >Sacred words that rock me in a cradle of comfort and security >It’s sure to be a night of flight akin to Marijane mornings >waking up ON HIGH >But no cannibus sativa for this ms. mimi diva (at least not >today) -- *don’t ask me why* >Winter Blazes amazes the timid child in me >So I be floatin’ above life’s fire~y trials with whimsical >wings that fly >Gliding … while riding roller coaster realms of reality >I’m a sneak freak~a like Delrica …molesting words >subliminally >Criminally … >All willy~nilly and Robynwildchild~like >But my soulchild is innocent and law~abiding >Steady fighting those things that go bump in the night >So if you’re wondering -- if I stopped writing >The answer is NO / My pen is leaking but I still got a lil' >flow >*Photo takes out pen & pad – And turns up the light* > > >*Dusty & Rusty* > > >
:: Fajada 02/25/08 ::
look at love how it tangles with the one fallen in love
look at spirit how it fuses with earth giving it new life
why think separately of this life and the next when one is born from the last ~ Rumi
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72604, RE: YEAY!!! I'm so glad I came in here tonight! Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-08-08 04:34 PM
I'm "always" glad to see your name on the board Missy! -- :9 -- So indeed I'm glad you came in here to peep me.
*Thank You*
Edit: I had a question about "Fajada" -- tried to look it up but all I could find was Fajada Butte info -- which doesn't really explain the relationship YOUR Fajada had with "you".
I may have to ^UP^ your tribute and ask you this again, but I just wanted to know exactly WHO was it that passed away in your tribute (and in your sig) and what was their relationship to you?
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72582, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by txpost, Fri Mar-07-08 09:06 AM
this inspires me to "still write". i thank you.
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72605, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-08-08 04:39 PM
Well git to writing then -- :P Hurrrrr up! *smiles*
Good 2 C U still around ...
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72591, so... Posted by blak_yukon, Fri Mar-07-08 01:35 PM
*waves*
me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc
dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek
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72606, Waves Back ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-08-08 04:41 PM
Huggg // Kiss // Pinch // all that good shyt! -- :9
How U been sir?
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72592, Nice drop sis'... Posted by KnowOne, Fri Mar-07-08 04:36 PM
good to see you back. Missed you!
*HUGZ*
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72600, RE: Nice drop sis'... Posted by ak_reborn, Sat Mar-08-08 02:50 PM
Like Damn, thats shook me up, glad to see you back/
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72608, Heyyyyyy AK ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-08-08 04:45 PM
shake~shake~shake -- (shakin' U ^UP^) -- :P
I see you been holdin' it down to da ground -- And that's a good thing! -- ;)
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72607, RE: Nice drop sis'... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-08-08 04:43 PM
Missed U 2! -- But I miss seeing YOUR flows on the board more than anything.
Check yo inbox later -- I think I got a proposition/project for the board -- *stir up some writing creativity*
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72630, ooohhhh....this sounds good... cant wait.... Posted by KnowOne, Sun Mar-09-08 07:44 PM
>Check yo inbox later -- I think I got a proposition/project >for the board -- *stir up some writing creativity*
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72601, RE: good gold Posted by tonka truck, Sat Mar-08-08 03:22 PM
don't no if i should speak no no to soon or spider man sneak oh boy bubble yum seals leak your style is weak iron tongue smiles dribble creeks sing sing abrir door swing no showing freedom abraham holy ghost ryder your a mad magizine writter pizza biter did it in 2003 cheese now you can see why we 9 dragons bleed tea for full up cups wu's bee steal fly druids tax collectors when there is no choice to be debaters no decisions to make then liberty nipple scales is fake posted up on a lake front like a body hanging from concrete don't seek let them find backyard stars that's who i be what about you girl you a g pulling peace but scared to text a response don't need yo pay check i got my own knocks leave heads blown
what you know about the VA rebate? on the move again-killa captin
TE-TE The End - To Everybody
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72609, Uhhhhhh ... Yeah ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-08-08 04:46 PM
I Love U 2 Tonka -- :9
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72637, RE: Uhhhhhh ... Yeah ... Posted by tonka truck, Mon Mar-10-08 11:48 AM
to catch you up since you miss part one death comes on the dust of the wind
check: <!-- Copied from MySpace.com --> <a href="http://www.myspace.com/hellsmokenbroomstonefire">Find me on MySpace and be my friend!</a>
TE-TE The End - To Everybody
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72612, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by ASIEM, Sat Mar-08-08 10:25 PM
how did i miss this well i know I haven't been reading as much these past few weeks just droppin er now and then you did these boards just us again tho i believe it was i that dropped the first name droppin piece back in 00 or 01 or whenever it was i started here I had to say that seein as you forgot your old buddy that won a collab with you :-( as for you and your skizzillz there is no other writer that is as consistent with a style as you i can tell your work without your name under it and always potent so for that i must :-)
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
www.myspace.com/asiem61
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72617, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Mar-09-08 03:36 PM
If you notice my love, I "only" used the ~LADIES~ names in this muggg -- (this time)-- Not the fellas -- so I didn't leave you out -- :9
*Read It Again*
And then know that I could never withhold YOUR name from a pCe I wrote if the menfolk were being highlighted.
This is my "first" name droppin' joint -- Tho I've seen many folks do it B~4 (including you) -- But I wanted to highlight the ladies this time, cuz I can relate moreso to their plights, aspirations, and inspirations.
Thanx for peeping ASIEM -- *much appreciated*
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72654, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by ASIEM, Mon Mar-10-08 11:08 PM
Now don't I feel stupid OMG how contrite I am I should have known better I must be feeling unappreciated suffering low esteem or something LMAO@me now that i got that out thank you You love me so well
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
www.myspace.com/asiem61
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72763, Smacks You Upside Da Head ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-15-08 01:09 PM
I wasn't gon' say nutthin' -- but the more I think about it ...
:P ~*SMACK*~ :P
>thank you You love me so well -- (and you betta know thissssss maynnnnn)
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72616, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by InFluenCe, Sun Mar-09-08 04:47 AM
i dont know if you remember who i am... but i sure do remember you... and im glad i actually came onto this site to check out what's going on, because i got to see this...
you're flows are still great, i miss them, truly i do...
and i hope you're doing just fine with everything in life...
=]
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72618, Of Course I Remember You Boo ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Mar-09-08 03:51 PM
You must be ... what? ... 18 or 19 yrs. old now, right? -- :P
I remember you when you were about 15 -- tryna hit on me! -- *snickers*
I still luv ya! -- *wink* -- Glad 2 C U back on Freestyle.
Thanx 4 the peep
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72632, inbox n/m Posted by InFluenCe, Mon Mar-10-08 01:28 AM
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72634, "I’m a sneak freak~a"...word? Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Mon Mar-10-08 09:52 AM
SHOW YOUR TOES!
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72648, RE: "I’m a sneak freak~a"...word? Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Mar-10-08 10:03 PM
You don't wanna see these ashy, crusty/rusty winter feet -- *trust me* -- :P
Maybe after a coupla pedicures when the weather gets warmer -- I'll flash you a peep. Right now these size 10's are sportin' boots & tennis shoes. Nothing cute about that -- :9
But heyyyyyy, how YOU doin'? -- *Huggs*
You got that Blood Pressure under control?
*Inbox*
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72641, OMG OMG OMG Posted by marijane, Mon Mar-10-08 12:50 PM
is this the revolution resolution rising?
YES
keep shining!
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72656, RE: OMG OMG OMG Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Mar-10-08 11:24 PM
>is this the revolution resolution rising?
But of course! -- And you *know* thisssssss maynnnnn ... :P
Whuzzzup Missy?
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72645, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by the_best_part, Mon Mar-10-08 07:51 PM
very refreshing
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72649, Hey Ms. Best Part ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Mar-10-08 10:08 PM
You got some new pictures of that handsome baby? -- *Just Asking* -- (Gee, I sure hope that's a boy ... But if not, you got some new pictures of that pretty baby?) -- :P
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72767, i am late Posted by Babynoon, Sat Mar-15-08 05:38 PM
Queen of Sensuality
thanks firstly for the ode and i dont deserve, but bless your spirit of peace love & happy feelings forever in you
we appreciate you here
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72923, Better Late -- Than Never ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Mar-24-08 05:52 PM
*smiles*
>thanks firstly for the ode and i dont deserve,
... you deserve all the goodness "OUT THERE" that your little heart can hold -- *receive it graciously*
Thanx for your appreciation.
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73420, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by gee, Tue Apr-15-08 08:42 AM
damn, some internet/life/serendipitous thing me and I trip over this trying to cheer myself up after getting new of Hub's departure (yeah I'm late on that but in the back of beyond!) and this went a way.
How many names can you list without getting sharp objects thrown at you, answer is one less than you wrote
gee
The key is complexity
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73456, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Apr-16-08 07:12 PM
>How many names can you list without getting sharp objects thrown at you, >answer is one less than you wrote
I'm glad you answered your own question gee -- :P
Damn it's good to see (and hear) from you again -- *smiles*
Thanx 4 the inbox ...
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73427, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by Pit Bull, Tue Apr-15-08 12:29 PM
I'm glad somebody brought this piece back to the top here... nice nice nice... what words did you use? "drunken stupor flow" i think is what it was... this was bad, bad bad... and I mean bad like super bad baby. ;) Yeah, I just ran with some mclovin on you...
anyway, I love these pieces with the names, and this one especially was well done.
Never stop
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73457, Oh My! Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Apr-16-08 07:16 PM
> ;-) Yeah, I just ran with some mclovin on you...
*Always Appreciated*
(((Welcome Back, By The Way)))
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73882, RE: Oh My! Posted by freedomfighter, Mon Apr-28-08 06:46 PM
where you at? miss san-toni braxton sunrays don't shine between close teeth
Freeworld Order Dangurus Mines
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73474, Nice... Posted by Free2Fly, Thu Apr-17-08 10:05 AM
I definitely have to allow my pen to leak more, its a release for me. Keep doing what you do!
Peace & Blessings
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73805, still feeding them bims Posted by XadaboBangGud, Fri Apr-25-08 02:42 PM
light bims thatis
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73884, photo! im sorry i missed this! Posted by Ezzsential, Mon Apr-28-08 07:17 PM
i apologize that i missed this it was a beautiful peice and NOONE writes poems like u girl! painting a beautiful portrait. thanks for using my name..
chinese men come here and cook americans that FRIED FOOD and go home and eat white rice--because they're trying to play us....so thats the only reason why they did it--lmao
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87236, ARCHIVE PLEASE Thank you PHOTO Posted by ASIEM, Mon Dec-27-10 06:44 PM
yeah whatever happened to that "archive" this is timeless and so yes "Ezzsential" i made a boo boo of myself the first time in my reply oh pay attention to the simple details or u just might miss the obvious lmao @me
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87240, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by gsquared, Tue Dec-28-10 07:32 PM
Sounds good as always...
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87437, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by SiPhO_aZiZi, Wed Jan-19-11 08:40 PM
and i am so glad you still write photosyn...keep inspiring.
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87441, RE: I Still Write ... Posted by WILDOUT, Thu Jan-20-11 01:48 PM
gotta love how a poem written three years ago can still be on top to represent a) the input you put into it and b) the input you put into us
766 views say word
:)
much love photo
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