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72378, just a thought....
Posted by AidenWaves, Sun Feb-10-08 06:08 PM
i'm thinkin bout
submission
letting the cosmos use me
to spead seeds of unity
unification

playing eternal muse
to a movement seen both few
and far between

selfishness through generousity
can no longer be
a crutch
blossoms have to spring

so with these words
i beg to be forgiven
while i change freind from foe

so what you will
my sojourn is set
so in all things old and new
love will not loose strength


72434, We didn't know how to reach you
Posted by marijane, Mon Feb-18-08 04:52 PM
but your mail is still coming there

and we have moved
72491, RE: We didn't know how to reach you
Posted by AidenWaves, Sun Feb-24-08 11:58 AM
still trying to reach myself.
72519, RE: just a thought....
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Feb-26-08 10:22 PM
Your ~brain waves~ are still vibing with electricity -- and that's a good thing! -- *smiles*


(((Thought Patterns Received)))


72547, i like what you said here
Posted by mindful, Sun Mar-02-08 03:15 PM
selfishness through generosity
can no longer be
a crutch
blossoms have to spring

and here:

so with these words
i beg to be forgiven
while i change friend from foe


in the last stanza, i didn't quite know if you meant "sew" or "say" but it ends the poem well. Peace~


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