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Topic subject | just a thought.... |
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72378, just a thought.... Posted by AidenWaves, Sun Feb-10-08 06:08 PM
i'm thinkin bout submission letting the cosmos use me to spead seeds of unity unification
playing eternal muse to a movement seen both few and far between
selfishness through generousity can no longer be a crutch blossoms have to spring
so with these words i beg to be forgiven while i change freind from foe
so what you will my sojourn is set so in all things old and new love will not loose strength
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72434, We didn't know how to reach you Posted by marijane, Mon Feb-18-08 04:52 PM
but your mail is still coming there
and we have moved
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72491, RE: We didn't know how to reach you Posted by AidenWaves, Sun Feb-24-08 11:58 AM
still trying to reach myself.
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72519, RE: just a thought.... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Feb-26-08 10:22 PM
Your ~brain waves~ are still vibing with electricity -- and that's a good thing! -- *smiles*
(((Thought Patterns Received)))
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72547, i like what you said here Posted by mindful, Sun Mar-02-08 03:15 PM
selfishness through generosity can no longer be a crutch blossoms have to spring
and here:
so with these words i beg to be forgiven while i change friend from foe
in the last stanza, i didn't quite know if you meant "sew" or "say" but it ends the poem well. Peace~
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