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Topic subjectWhere you been Linc??? (Missing Link)
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72003, Where you been Linc??? (Missing Link)
Posted by Lincoln Hawk, Mon Jan-14-08 12:19 PM
October 20th...my life changed...in the emergency room contemplatin my game...plan...understand...Lincoln no ordinary man...but still human...doctors playin the nuisance...misteppin my movements...diagnosis was somewhat inconclusive...you bruised it...sprained it...kidney stones...no...no wait its...ya appendix...its hendrix...jimmy playin my tension...guitar strings stretchin my heart beats...i start speech..."lets get the fuck outta here!!!"...doc comes back with some info that laps my fear...its ya colon eyes swollen a hole has stopped my motion...frozen...shit leaking within my ocean...its serious...physical stature plastered and left Fraktured...i couldnt walk, shit or keep it movin...laid up in the hospital 16 days reduced it...my weight dropped 23 pounds...first 10 days they wouldnt let me eat or drink...ice chips was my shit then they took that away and im like "bitch!!!"...eyes dripped the pain was vicious...antibiotics didnt work so surgery was admitted...im fitted...a bag attached to my stomach i plummet...long incision down my chest almost touchin my nuts...its...its not what i wanted but breathin is still my function...finally i see my son and...hes scared...he doesnt understand why daddy is hurtin there...i tellem that pops is coo and he comes close and nods...approves...gives me a hug and i kiss his forhead smooth...hes a youngin...3 years old and daddy loves'em...my moms flew out from Cali fearing the worst...not her son in a hearse...doc said i coulda dropped dead...im shocked regrets thinkin back on some what could have been...in the ICU...lies and evil...my demise the sequal...came out alive and see thru...its so visual right now god i cant explain it...so i remain nameless and face it with a rage thats tenacious...im ageless...comin stronger than aids did...evasive...Lincoln new and improved...get the bag off in february like "you is that dude!!!"...ima clean up my act and start maneuverin too...its about that time...30 comin closer...the Hulkster...pythons grippin the holster...accurate aim...the vien...blood pumpin they gonna remember the name...its Lincoln!!!
72004, RE: Where you been Linc??? (Missing Link)
Posted by the_best_part, Mon Jan-14-08 01:23 PM
i had wrote a response telling my story but decided to put it in its own post...and instead just say, congrats on a second chance, hope all goes well and wishing you a speedy full recovery.
72007, RE: Where you been Linc??? (Missing Link)
Posted by blak_yukon, Mon Jan-14-08 01:37 PM
THE ONE AND ONLY!!!!!
72107, up n/m
Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Mon Jan-21-08 10:02 AM
72110, RE: Where you been Linc??? (Missing Link)
Posted by deep_thawtz, Mon Jan-21-08 07:01 PM
hot piece...very nice wordplay real vivid...only thing...the structure kind of made it a pain to read....but nonetheless...hot drop fam
72116, RE: Where you been Linc??? (Missing Link)
Posted by sikstyle, Tue Jan-22-08 02:21 AM
glad you doin better man; times like this where you get a second chance and can reinvent yourself, I really like the way you translated the story. peace
72734, RE: Where you been Linc??? (Missing Link)
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Thu Mar-13-08 11:47 PM
I'm trusting ... and praying ... you're fully recouperated by now ... *Just Checkin' ^UP^ On U*


Hopefully, you'll check back soon -- *Healing Hugggs*