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71812, work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by mindful, Thu Dec-27-07 11:52 AM
i've taken to writing haikus about my job and the recent changes and b.s. that's going on around "these parts." they're actually helping me to deal with my "still being here."
Ritualistic
day in day out, it never seems to change, how odd that this is my life.
Confined
Cubicles were meant to hold the insane. I’m not crazy folks, not yet.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
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you have to be humble when you're dealing with God ©jill scott
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71825, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by ASIEM, Fri Dec-28-07 11:24 AM
real life real people real situations lmao @ just how real funny this is when able to see it outside of self u dropped another bomb
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
www.myspace.com/asiem61
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71852, work haikus continued| fueled fire & indifference Posted by mindful, Mon Dec-31-07 12:51 PM
Fueled fire
it’s New Year’s Eve, and where am I? At work, of course, slaving for the man.
Indifference
Trapped, corporate world slaves on a new plantation, this almost makes me cry.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
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you have to be humble when you're dealing with God ©jill scott
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71868, work haikus continued| Almost Lunchtime & Suspicion Posted by mindful, Wed Jan-02-08 01:18 PM
Almost lunchtime
It’s nearly lunchtime, most of the day is gone, and I can’t wait to leave.
Suspicion
Curious are the trees swaying leafless to and fro, questioning me.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
--------------------------- http://msmind.wordpress.com http://www.clutchmagazine.com
I've never considered myself to be beautiful, and I still don't ©pam grier
no hate in '08
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71869, Indifferent and Chipotle Tacos Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Wed Jan-02-08 02:08 PM
*Indifferent* Do I really care No - So keep your overtime My sons pay me well *Chipotle Tacos* Chipotle Tacos Soft and with guacamole You're my concubine
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71870, :) i love these nm Posted by mindful, Wed Jan-02-08 06:16 PM
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I've never considered myself to be beautiful, and I still don't ©pam grier
no hate in '08
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71905, work haikus cont'd|Indistinct & Tunes to get By Posted by mindful, Tue Jan-08-08 10:42 AM
Indistinct
The naked trees smile whispering to each other, “she’s at work again."
Tunes to get By
Al Green shouts “Love and Happiness” as I drift off into a new world.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
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I've never considered myself to be beautiful, and I still don't ©pam grier
no hate in '08
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71908, :) babe we are two birds sharing the same feather quill Posted by PG, Tue Jan-08-08 11:19 AM
I want to drop out sit on a mountain and hear the music of life
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71910, i knew you could relate Posted by mindful, Tue Jan-08-08 01:17 PM
lol... these are getting me through man, seriously...
and your contribution, i love it :) hope your days get easier there.
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71924, RE: i knew you could relate Posted by ASIEM, Wed Jan-09-08 12:32 AM
okay so you thought i could not relate to tired just cause i don't work
well let me say this unemployed i might be but lazy i aint
this 5 7 5 play on words is enuff work to keep me busy
now haiku to sleep haiku at work and tell me later what you think thanks for lettin me have fun creatin poems to make people think
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
www.myspace.com/asiem61
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71927, work haikus cont'd|Unlearned & Job Security Posted by mindful, Wed Jan-09-08 02:49 PM
Unlearned
correcting errors for the same mistakes could be the death of me, *groans*
job security
one thing is certain, my job is secure, because no one seems to learn.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
--------------------------- http://msmind.wordpress.com http://www.clutchmagazine.com
I've never considered myself to be beautiful, and I still don't ©pam grier
no hate in '08
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71928, LOL, nice Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Wed Jan-09-08 03:23 PM
New Era I am quite obsessed With diverse caps for my dome I'm stylin on you Venus
Hard to understand Why those heavenly bodies Disrupt my orbit
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71974, i truly like Venus :)|work haikus cont'd Posted by mindful, Fri Jan-11-08 10:19 PM
financial complaints
it's friday again, i worked overtime to get nothing but pennies.
the savior
another weekend's here to pull me from the tight grip of work's sharp fangs.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
--------------------------- http://msmind.wordpress.com http://www.clutchmagazine.com
you are the meaning of everything beautiful, i can't wait to breathe your air. ©ledisi
no hate in '08
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72705, RE: LOL, nice Posted by Euphoric Mutiny, Thu Mar-13-08 12:41 PM
>New Era > >I am quite obsessed >With diverse caps for my dome >I'm stylin on you > > >Venus > >Hard to understand >Why those heavenly bodies >Disrupt my orbit > >
this reminds me of when,
Sun makes a smile that spreads sky’s width
Sprinkling dangling colours and
Angling them aptly where
The world will notice and thank Him,
Leaves my brooding to meander
And go over the mountain
Where Sun took the whole day to arrive, only to hide...
But he’s alright, he’s not angry, merely
Dancing with Sky, romancing her to night,
placing on her breast diamond moods that rightly alter sight...
I "saw" this after i came 4rm wrk though, no matter how much they glorify it as a struggle this "grind" just aint worth it....
pictures like this in my mind keep me focused on what's true... i like that...
*Thank u*
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72194, work haikus cont'd|affair & set me free Posted by mindful, Sun Jan-27-08 05:07 PM
affair
sought out someone else, because i've grown tired of struggling with you.
set me free
this life, keeps me chained. i want so badly to leave, you won't let me go.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
--------------------------- http://msmind.wordpress.com http://www.clutchmagazine.com
What is without periods of rest will not endure. ©Ovid
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72203, He's home Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Mon Jan-28-08 11:59 AM
I really missed you We were closer as children Still, time quells no blood
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72218, *bumps up* i'm diggin'these Posted by blak_yukon, Tue Jan-29-08 12:59 PM
<--really!,have one--
me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc
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72238, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by tonka truck, Wed Jan-30-08 02:18 AM
statement death snow sway paper flow no family calls we bear love sin nurse
strained 2 usher life mountians of polar caps kiss peace slides watery heart
it's thawing fires comfort care throw another round of goats milk rest
at last the toxic water consumes gift of g-d's pain beat box stop talk TE-TE The End - To Everybody
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72245, i really like the 1st two Posted by mindful, Wed Jan-30-08 09:46 AM
you "haiku" rather well.
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What is without periods of rest will not endure. ©Ovid
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72299, awesome. Posted by STIMULI, Mon Feb-04-08 04:57 PM
~underneath it all~
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72307, RE: cursed 4 life? Posted by freedomfighter, Tue Feb-05-08 02:36 PM
yes rocked between thumb cotton spikes slavery strikes sun black clouds bleeding green
never seen before laws kindle lost choice paper on the back of earth
working a 9 2 5 2 be rich spooning a deeper dish scoop souls
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72315, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Wed Feb-06-08 04:55 AM
the days are grayer i'm more than what i've become yet i await death
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72329, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by freedomfighter, Wed Feb-06-08 04:15 PM
on a wooden chair don't you feel it coming how where? nature will carry
hey your good but you ain't that good touching strokes as finger tips glide across wanding path catch a laugh and let go the stress
"ki"
peace it's me! dumb ass
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72355, work haikus: disappointed & sunligh Posted by mindful, Fri Feb-08-08 10:00 AM
Disappointed
Interviewing for life, I’m back to the drawing board, trying to save me.
Sunlight
The view near my desk is what keeps me happy. I thank GOD for sunlight.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
--------------------------- http://msmind.wordpress.com http://www.clutchmagazine.com
love takes time, work, patience, and effort. are you ready for it?
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72366, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by invisible ink, Fri Feb-08-08 01:43 PM
Confined
Cubicles were meant to hold the insane. I’m not crazy folks, not yet.
ha!.....don't u know it...kima
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72394, Hope, Imperfection, Hope part 2, Faith Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Tue Feb-12-08 08:24 PM
**Hope** God, I hope to be A vessel for your glory Even when I sin
**Imperfection** I do fall often Though my flesh, dense with leaven Allows me to rise
**Hope (part 2)** Maybe, after all The blind night will free the sky Now my heart sees dawn **Faith** Faith is breathing air Unseen, and yet known as fact So take a deep breath
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72395, Annual review >times two< Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Tue Feb-12-08 08:53 PM
WHITE MAN, I CARES NOT YOU ARE NO KING OVER ME JUST GIVE ME MY CHECK
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But all jokes aside I'm what's hot in the aisles What's up with my raise
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72417, just give me a check is right Posted by mindful, Fri Feb-15-08 06:58 PM
dude, and i had THE worst day today at work... *sighs*
these folks don't deserve me. lol... seriously. i'm digging the haikus. keep 'em comin'
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72431, RE: failing christian crusade Posted by freedomfighter, Mon Feb-18-08 01:58 PM
fast track stress central squeeze sauce meat sardines lunch break no time 2 run out
death of paper pen 2 serial number lines wait 2 be taken care
of!
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72458, failing christian crusade Posted by mindful, Wed Feb-20-08 09:18 PM
is a dope title...
i like the first haiku in that short series.
definitely digable *nods*
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72446, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by blak_yukon, Tue Feb-19-08 12:35 PM
the boss is away all this bandwidth for me subways, eat fresh
me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc
dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek
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72456, goodbye sunlight & the idiot bunch Posted by mindful, Wed Feb-20-08 09:12 PM
goodbye sunlight
sunlight is no more our department has moved and darkness covers me.
the idiot bunch
yes and no answers are not for idiots, they need to be spoon-fed.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
-------------------------------- http://www.flickr.com/photos/msmind/ http://www.clutchmagazine.com
a new kind of down...
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72466, RE: Haikus Posted by ak_reborn, Thu Feb-21-08 07:25 PM
Haikus are jewels if written with exceptional thought and youve showed that.
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72505, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by tonka truck, Tue Feb-26-08 12:38 PM
no respect sit down vapors cause armpit stains dirt thrown sustain crown jam
don't look find wisdom elephant trunks jungle load unload baby head
first delivery- use skills to see the seen and become empty to draw lines around phantom atoms! TE-TE The End - To Everybody
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72515, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Feb-26-08 10:09 PM
If my memory serves me correctly, your writing has "always" been therapeutic -- to the reader -- as well as for yourself -- ;)
From what I can see, you've mastered the art of haikus with wit, wisdom & humor -- and I appreciate that!
*Carry On*
P.S. Hopefully things will get better @ work ...
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72536, RE: photo it's always goo 2 see u Posted by freedomfighter, Sat Mar-01-08 07:04 AM
behind wilt flowers sunlight shows shadows 2 dark 2 see stand up
haven't seen you around but every now and then i catch a glimpse of natures best assets
pull down the curtains next time if you don't want 2 be caught
miss you well halfway true i miss what you do for the boards it's like a 100 year old birthday for a man who can't blow
hope to bump into you later over and out! peace one love
Te-Te
oh yeah did you catch my videos on myspace before i deleted them if not pinch your tits and wake the fuck up
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72544, RE: photo it's always goo 2 see u Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Mar-01-08 11:36 PM
You're a sweetheart freedom -- :* -- But no, I didn't see your deleted myspace videos ...
*Tits Pinched* -- I'm awake now! -- :9
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72543, thanks lady Posted by mindful, Sat Mar-01-08 10:00 PM
i've gotta interview on monday and another meeting with another facility. so, i may have something new to write about later :)
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72688, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Wed Mar-12-08 09:42 AM
I took a day off For that Verizon FIOS Hooky On Demand
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72751, RE: job lost Posted by freedomfighter, Fri Mar-14-08 03:23 PM
where it came money children picking earth's ice dose outfitted hip hop
most 2 lazy mountians peaks 2 punches no time 2 clock couch
i can't speak no job volcano's preparing leaps bond cutting down tree
cure 2 jealousy going against nature rape we it's just me free
employee at will iron mine why can't i find a temple 2 rest
2 bless 2 go 2 church my own ambitions comes first unhog tie thirst
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72802, Why I Am Currently Unemployed Posted by RatpackSlim, Mon Mar-17-08 10:35 PM
brick and mortar stores are not as fast as downloads bye, record store job...
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72810, ha. doesn't it sting though? God, I think I'm stuck nm Posted by mindful, Tue Mar-18-08 05:28 PM
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72803, yup most def can relate to this one Posted by Ezzsential, Mon Mar-17-08 11:32 PM
loved the angle of the cubicle part!
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72811, work haikus cont'd| stuck & loyalty Posted by mindful, Tue Mar-18-08 05:34 PM
stuck
i've searched for so long, though complacency is safe, i still yearn for change.
loyalty
i'm as loyal as they pay me to be. who cares about me? no one.
©Tremaine L. Loadholt
------------------------------- http://www.clutchmagazine.com http://clutchmagonline.com/forums
the search for peace is a long and tedious journey. be prepared.
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72834, RE: work haikus cont'd| stuck & loyalty Posted by freedomfighter, Wed Mar-19-08 02:06 PM
only 4 minutes seasonal time off return desk pack up retired
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73088, RE: it's alive Posted by tonka truck, Tue Apr-01-08 11:23 AM
no C.P.R air hard compressing liver bottom of bag rush
found still intact dust off bee's stinger line up TB cough tele floor nurse
back in action again who let the devil in hell is only 4 saints
get out and slam the door behind you because i'm smoking!
TE-TE The End - To Everybody
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73877, RE: work haikus: ritualistic & confined Posted by freedomfighter, Mon Apr-28-08 06:32 PM
hooked real pull give slack earth expell all one needs birth pang first you must learn rest
clocks don't keep records how many grains sand dooms blocks water tracks then leap in
Freeworld Order Dangurus Mines
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