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70656, timeless pieces Posted by ASIEM, Thu Oct-18-07 02:57 PM
looking back then fast forward there in the middle one thought one promise equal in distance close to the heaert written on the tables rcorded (TIME LAPSE) in harmony with heavens song celestial bodies movin keepin pace >>> always silent he listens woah hold that ....a moment time waits then gone a memory stored deep finding caverns in mind not heart. no more thinking of self giving nothing short of purpose Angels everywhere the message givin and recieved the tongue on loan speaking in tune with ryhthm's lulliby Peace resides serene beginnings the night's so soft wet dreams abide oooh feel the hope rise reaching the once hollow places deep touching, replacing still born desires birthing multiple trembles pushin past fears grip no longer held in addictions vice releasing pleading praying higher higher intense tension gone pulse beating smoothly eyes lifted unspoken LOVE relized the fruit of this once wounded soul...BELIEVES
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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70663, RE: timeless pieces Posted by Street Poet, Thu Oct-18-07 08:03 PM
Great poem, I like the imagery.
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70671, RE: timeless pieces Posted by Jahlovall3305, Fri Oct-19-07 09:42 AM
BLACKEYED PEA TIME WAITS FOR NO ONE, SO I'LL SIT AND WAIT...
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70672, RE: timeless pieces Posted by freedomfighter, Fri Oct-19-07 11:26 AM
enjoyed readiness of action packed trailers of motionless picture implanted on open eye lids but can't be digested no fears no hope of monkeys playing on government own grounds infront of lions stalking money was the message of essence respect it but can't panic stranded in the only place of stress lessons can't be pressured by employers wood grains but no gains since septembers last day paid power theives raid storage banks local dudes pulling pranks making a speaking in tongue links devil longs 2 wink in weed smoke heart don't sink among the fight i can't even precieve to leave wit dick hard between legs banging soft hollow bodies cost what you we have left if i follow the multiple digits on cops cars k-9 sicu waking up in a cosmic trumatic coma in micu i always new\i couldn't trust you
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70833, RE: timeless pieces Posted by Leia5678s, Mon Oct-29-07 10:30 PM
Beautiful.
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71414, *Timeless Indeed* Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Dec-03-07 12:08 AM
>written on the tables >rcorded (TIME LAPSE) >in harmony with >heavens song >celestial bodies movin >keepin pace >>> >always silent >he listens >woah hold that ....a moment >time waits then gone >a memory stored deep finding >caverns in mind >not heart. >no more >thinking of self >giving nothing short of purpose >Angels everywhere >the message givin and recieved >the tongue on loan >speaking in tune with >ryhthm's lulliby >Peace resides >serene beginnings
Your placement of words brings an aura of serenity & calm~ness ...
*Peace*
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71475, up for motivation and inspiration Posted by mindful, Thu Dec-06-07 09:09 PM
b/c clearly this did it for me:
a memory stored deep finding caverns in mind not heart. no more thinking of self giving nothing short of purpose Angels everywhere the message givin and recieved the tongue on loan speaking in tune with ryhthm's lulliby Peace resides serene beginnings the night's so soft wet dreams abide
lately, you've been rather expressive and most of your drops have been quite visually detailed. thanks for that. it's moving. Peace~
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*childlike*
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71489, RE: timeless pieces Posted by BannedWidth, Fri Dec-07-07 10:23 PM
see, it's stuff like this that make me love this OKP thing and inspire me to keep my pen movin'....beautifully done fam.
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71664, RE: timeless pieces Posted by ASIEM, Sun Dec-16-07 01:22 AM
thanks fam sometimes a piece rises above all else and simply reminds me there is definitley a higher conscious that lends itself to us
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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