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70656, timeless pieces
Posted by ASIEM, Thu Oct-18-07 02:57 PM
looking back
then fast forward
there in the middle one thought
one promise
equal in distance
close to the heaert
written on the tables
rcorded (TIME LAPSE)
in harmony with
heavens song
celestial bodies movin
keepin pace >>>
always silent
he listens
woah hold that ....a moment
time waits then gone
a memory stored deep finding
caverns in mind
not heart.
no more
thinking of self
giving nothing short of purpose
Angels everywhere
the message givin and recieved
the tongue on loan
speaking in tune with
ryhthm's lulliby
Peace resides
serene beginnings
the night's so soft
wet dreams abide
oooh feel the hope
rise reaching the once hollow
places deep touching, replacing still born
desires birthing multiple trembles
pushin past fears grip
no longer held in addictions vice
releasing
pleading
praying higher higher
intense
tension gone
pulse beating smoothly
eyes lifted
unspoken LOVE relized
the fruit of this once wounded soul...BELIEVES

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
70663, RE: timeless pieces
Posted by Street Poet, Thu Oct-18-07 08:03 PM
Great poem, I like the imagery.
70671, RE: timeless pieces
Posted by Jahlovall3305, Fri Oct-19-07 09:42 AM

BLACKEYED PEA
TIME WAITS FOR NO ONE, SO I'LL SIT AND WAIT...
70672, RE: timeless pieces
Posted by freedomfighter, Fri Oct-19-07 11:26 AM
enjoyed readiness
of action packed trailers of motionless
picture implanted
on open eye lids but can't be digested
no fears no hope of monkeys
playing on government own grounds infront of lions stalking money
was the message of essence respect it but
can't panic stranded in the only place of stress lessons
can't be pressured
by employers wood grains but no gains since septembers last day paid
power theives raid
storage banks local dudes pulling pranks
making a speaking in tongue links devil longs 2 wink
in weed smoke heart don't sink
among the fight
i can't even precieve to leave
wit dick hard between legs
banging soft
hollow bodies cost
what you we have left
if i follow the multiple digits
on cops cars k-9 sicu
waking up in a cosmic trumatic coma in micu
i always new\i couldn't trust you

OKAYPLAYER

MY Lord TE_TE
theendtoeverythings "sleeps"



70833, RE: timeless pieces
Posted by Leia5678s, Mon Oct-29-07 10:30 PM
Beautiful.
71414, *Timeless Indeed*
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Dec-03-07 12:08 AM
>written on the tables
>rcorded (TIME LAPSE)
>in harmony with
>heavens song
>celestial bodies movin
>keepin pace >>>
>always silent
>he listens
>woah hold that ....a moment
>time waits then gone
>a memory stored deep finding
>caverns in mind
>not heart.
>no more
>thinking of self
>giving nothing short of purpose
>Angels everywhere
>the message givin and recieved
>the tongue on loan
>speaking in tune with
>ryhthm's lulliby
>Peace resides
>serene beginnings


Your placement of words brings an aura of serenity & calm~ness ...


*Peace*


71475, up for motivation and inspiration
Posted by mindful, Thu Dec-06-07 09:09 PM
b/c clearly this did it for me:

a memory stored deep finding
caverns in mind
not heart.
no more
thinking of self
giving nothing short of purpose
Angels everywhere
the message givin and recieved
the tongue on loan
speaking in tune with
ryhthm's lulliby
Peace resides
serene beginnings
the night's so soft
wet dreams abide

lately, you've been rather expressive and most of your drops have been quite visually detailed. thanks for that. it's moving. Peace~

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*childlike*
71489, RE: timeless pieces
Posted by BannedWidth, Fri Dec-07-07 10:23 PM
see, it's stuff like this that make me love this OKP thing and inspire me to keep my pen movin'....beautifully done fam.
71664, RE: timeless pieces
Posted by ASIEM, Sun Dec-16-07 01:22 AM
thanks fam
sometimes a piece rises above all else and simply reminds me there is definitley a higher conscious that lends itself to us

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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