come closer O brotha of my familiar,
swim in the abyss of my liquid brown eyes,
drink thirstily from my well,
and know
ME
im so Blac
i cradle midnight in my arms
and call him Sun.
ME
like a fine wine my mind
is the cellar of thought
were vocabulary and expressions age
to ferment into wisdom.

I came back to this board, because I got lost in life and forgot how to write, my words hit the pad in jumbled rambings.
So I'm looking for inspiration, and constructive criticism.