you need to be where i be, stay, is
whatever niggas say
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looking for a honest opinion upon this board
okay?
tell me keep it light, so i spit it like my complexion
the lesson you learn i dont know when to stop,
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so I take my magilla gorilla resident president loving ass off to the next spot
and wait till the Fruityloops beat drop
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like the title of musical, poetry, lyrical monster-forever theres someone better, I never yell it but never back out
rhyme with my back out, the paper, the ink the pen i get ill, and spit it back out
Im a underrated, lack of confidence, spineless bastard
shopping my masters,
out to my masters 'til I black out




I'm really looking to improve as an artist. I have things that I feel I need work on, such as my delivery, breath control, etc.. I just want an honest, unbiased critique/opinion. If theres anything else in my music you notice, feel free to let me know, but please think before you speak. Some things are a part of a person's signature style or personal preference that they wish not to change, as we should all be aware of that, DUH!

LOL..

Preciate the time and any feedback to be given..

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