Yeah I bought your CD, and I saw your hardcover /
But I want my paperback, I don’t believe you at all brother! /
Quit your yappin, your lines are whack by design /
While my rhymes are outta sight like Im rappin for the blind /
Nicknames elevator cause Im on another level /
I rock more than a pebble, underground like the devil /
Competition is nun so its not just white and black /
Dissin Imperial will Force my Empire to Strike Back /
Speak easy on free beats courtesy of MP, 3 /
Emcees will defeat thee, wont believe me till you CD’s /
Skills, in less than 8-TRACKs you get verbally sprayed down /
No guns though, so I wont bus a round like Greyhound /
You say you’re keeping it real but you lion like the Sphinx /
Only heavy metal you hold is in your blood, iron and zinc /
My venoms like denim because its in my genes /
And my rhymes are so phat I might split the seams /



Just to fill you guys in on some info: the line about "not just white and black", Im asian = yellow; "Imperial" is the name of our friend's (soon to be) production company; "MP, 3" = Michael Petey, who is our producer and there's 3 emcees in our group

I only started writing/ rapping about 3 or 4 months ago so any criticism is welcome. Keep in mind, I just took snippets from two different songs so it might not flow from bar to bar as nice as it normally would in the real thing. Bring on your opinions though!