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Topic subjectDeep Thawtz, Saginaw, MI Emcee/Poet/Revolutionary
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72024, Deep Thawtz, Saginaw, MI Emcee/Poet/Revolutionary
Posted by deep_thawtz, Tue Jan-15-08 07:25 PM
I am here because I heard alot of good things about this site....I am hoping to elevate my game further, get some honest critique of my art, and maybe do a lil battling.....

I been the realest nigga to ever spit in a minute,
from beginning to the ending, revolution is impending//
not pretending to be somethin im not, my only claim's that im hot,
natural flames that will gain me a spot//
alot of ppl say my thoughts thats out the frame should be cropped,
but im not, gonna retract, my weapon is word fact//
Im rap, hip hop, r&b and pop,
jazz, punk and blues, are you confused?//
dude, listen you'll understand my movement,
actions speak louder so my mission's to prove it//
most of these hip hop heads remain useless,
scarred by the norm & can't get rid of the bruises//
like eddie griffin, they steady remain foolish,
can't even measure coke but hollerin 'they do this'//
need to acknowledge the power of our music,
take the public's ear and fill it with revolution

check me out on myspace...
http://www.myspace.com/deepthawtz

let me know wassup...Im open to collabs and all that...holla