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70419, gotta let me go Posted by tonka truck, Fri Sep-28-07 10:24 AM
they tired to erase me they tired to steal my glory they tired to make me look fake see but humbley i return fire
they tired to kill me they tired to purchase me they tired to dirty sexy money cover me but infected thier main frame burn'n desire
open'n up a live wire and sparks hire bullet shells hit me in the chest taking me higher asking lord or lords Jesus to mummfle a dreamer ammit sword but i was ignored it struck grills of hummers
leaving them choken on side of the road burners 2 fingers was the bringer of life passenger pass'n azure gates after life under ground known as oser mason ruler
evil scales splita a thug nigga nwa animal road runner jaw breaker see a clevelander snoop dog pounded well rounded ducking lulu's sickles now thier in a pickle africa's horn feels the ripples from lone star fire controled by water
nuturing the earth doctors even feared my rebirth born star slipping m's purple hills in my armory shield asking themselve how was i healed kneeling infront of the white powder white power memory buddha leaking from long last hour
body was shaken i was awaken no mistaken walking on laws tiger claws rip'n astral plains playing temple egyptain games last think on mind is fame taging toes with pain in moms heart pops carrying a fathers feather in the dark eyes on the mark
shannon sharpe catches lies no more why i wasn't signed but confined while murders went free can't let liberty fuck me this ain't my story just humility of an beat my own dick gotta admit i'm sick but last time sperm flicks "howcome?"
"judge king, officer shepard"
they tired to erase me they tired to steal my glory they tired to make me look fake see but humbley i return fire
they tired to kill me they tired to purchase me they tired to dirty sexy money cover me but infected thier main frame burn'n desire
\\\\\\\\\\death upon my enemies///////////
dragon means: mylordTE-TE THEENDTOEVERYTHING
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72934, onsen Posted by Babynoon, Tue Mar-25-08 07:22 PM
the ultimate kozui to put out a kaji-im notta jap'but king?
there once was ever a burn to kill this feel'and it is real the crane fell from the building each brick of my labor sent my soulback to its savior' Kami sama is the green kusa by your fence'point in case (see) they didnt make her-she chocolate him or he'God did tete
i left forever today to not want for nothing'you;you;or you or tha truck.
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72943, RE: onsen Posted by tonka truck, Wed Mar-26-08 12:19 PM
i'm so over you sarah marshall
haha nice peace but what you do when you find out it's been your family the ones stealing from you causing you to fall?
you destory them like you do the other enemies please forgive me but you'll never hear from me or see me again off to the big top
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72946, RE: boutdammtimme Posted by Babynoon, Wed Mar-26-08 07:12 PM
........trapezetimme.....TTUTT
im too off to the hills, but forget you benny'it was gymnastically fantastic on sum assstick
over you aint no sleep missing in action'just relax kid.
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72975, RE: boutdammtimme Posted by tonka truck, Fri Mar-28-08 12:36 PM
what? still crazy as usual but i guess i'm getting to like it. why not we all are different aren't we lol anyway wuz up i see you must miss me if you keep writing love letters smirk akward shady eyes in a way i love you to that's where i'm at the city for lovers and i'm feeling the board walk breeze
see yeah
holla
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73018, RE: boutdammtimme Posted by Babynoon, Sun Mar-30-08 01:47 AM
people be makin me mayid(ghettobonics)lol
u luh dat stuff don't u? battinmy eyes face tilted arms folded tappin my heels.lol
loves foul sweetness
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73053, RE: boutdammtimme Posted by tonka truck, Mon Mar-31-08 04:59 PM
decompose apple peels va LPN license who would steal attempting 2 kill a career minded iron will family games fuck a recording deal stabbing high heels into stalker hearts how does it feel what i gotta do to be healed from this 8 year bill board collapse a lung and watch all these bitches be sprung hung gar on my come shots strung out crack headschasing that roc you mock me but this is the end of child's destiny child and rob wild fuck em all leyt'm all die fuck the money it's pass big faces as the meat from my fingers get caught in your braces
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73069, a rappas de light Posted by Babynoon, Mon Mar-31-08 07:50 PM
why go there? u lost me on reply tah 5
u ok?anyway.......Truckboy
fish a hook rot out'fuck in a mouth bitches be stale They be stir fried stink stint'whatevers your hell make a hit to sale'press hot on tails fuck yah hoar'i got knocked up by Dell Cyber stalker youdahone tah go to jail'you got lit after bail by Big Deal Shruggin Shoulders'promote this' keep it real'fuck how u feel Bitches need tah keep it real n' tha mahhhfuckin Vill villan vendetta vermin verbin lacey you traced she' Butt face u crazy! sniff your daisies'mockin birds space seed'have them babies Cum in where you're wanted'don't feel like being bothered' Get strung out Budah' yah souls to old in grimmie'they gonna know so stop tryin to out shine she' if u wan test call them haters' Beta to upgrade u and throw yah steez in a crater'deeply burried question: do you believe in slowing ur hurry???? oo oo
I just busted your cherrynmouth'pop lockin on worry? break it down' Don't u W O R R Y
it'll be over'this was a coutesy.
EDIT: cyber genetic gynnastics part 90000600...............000 inf.
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73078, RE: a rappas de light Posted by tonka truck, Tue Apr-01-08 08:02 AM
look under the sack and find no nuts so what you misfits don't get it and i'm covered in your vanity hell isn't angery it's the people attempting 2 out shine TT little cops crawl like capers in yogurt i wish it was over lifes lesson stop wearing guess and put on a dress because she ain't fresh and she ain't clean it's just a contusion that had her brain moving to the scrotum upgrade or degraded i really don't think i'm W O R R I E D about being engraved slain slaid and laid in a grave of marbles that's the best company any way because father will make them speak even if my soul is the west coast tormentor
but hey check out myspace.com/ladysnoblood new video
no respect no hand checks and you pussy smells like deep fried bird neck stew dropping on a sunrise wet beach
bitch have a nice day
don't pray for me because i'm not into kneeling at the alter
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73082, Bitchpleez Posted by Babynoon, Tue Apr-01-08 09:46 AM
Blockbusters called'ringin ur nuts bitch I got the squeeze' Don't try to erect more bullshit'flush that kindof shit in ur beach kid'
bitchplease
you tired of kneelin?boutdammmtime'a new profession hun?'lol pray that the next job keeps ur mouth suckin life than deathcome' here's a verse "kiss my converse!" kill the common connect the dayafter effects das yah microsoft check' Virus ironically hackin ur zest'somethin smellin fowl? its seeds on ur lips check urself'that dicks undercover'find ya lover
im tired of lettin go
I've let it go let me grow I let u know
I let it go
now how's this yo? you back fo mo
bitchplease
im drowning to let go im prouder if you know
hell aint far to go'
bitchplease
boutttdamtimme u let it grow.
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73086, RE: Bitchpleez Posted by tonka truck, Tue Apr-01-08 11:06 AM
fo sho you want mo of that haldol o no your crazy don't no what to call you a gent or a lady but i guess baby fits yo profile because yo mouth is defile that's wht's smelling fowl at noon one after noon a noon got struck now all this ho want to do is suck i see twinking off your words because i left your jaw broke on a curb and the verbs drizzle hemoptasis but no dazzle come backs you remind me of horse shack bad boy mace all up in yo face and i'm glad you embrace the welcome but you didn't wipe your lone star card and got swipe up under the heading fuck yo ring and the wedding even thought i am the best man i wouldn't even let you hold my dick in yo hand your enemies are your number one fan that make the blades run threw your torso kicking you back to the 80's grab a kango wonder womens lasso and snatch up a big bird asshole even macco can't fix it it's finished nice protraying to be innocent common wealth for a common scent fire cold now duck dodge balls and roll
you've been out shine going 4 mines where's your nines moore tattoo jibber slabber hollar not for a dollor but four a nut job
in yo mouth-e 40 you don't know me fam
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73096, '10 inch rim ryder Posted by Babynoon, Tue Apr-01-08 01:48 PM
Low rydin ur tonnka junk on 10inch rims spinnin'thinkin u hot They think not'innocent who? u tried to plot' ur mouth fowl smellin ur pork n bean fart'ur assmouf rots im as innocent as your wallpaper profiled changeable face coverups' im as innocent as you having sex with your ex's mother'
You the low down n dirty'i just know the who you is' you know the I is' but I don't want $1 to give'to u ur last meal at mind your Biz' they serving trash combos again'
im half woman half not takin yo shit' my pussy is allergic to wack dicks that pull tricks'
straight bitch straight gat wimp' pop ur own lips they look monkey like chimps'
im crazy im crazy
yeah
you're insane b
and im crazy 4 anticipat-in' after ur insanity prognosis'true b
The diagnosis to tete: you lack closure'enjoy yah pitty party wack-free'te te lean back-free
im half woman half findin u worthless'
find ur nut sack in a snickerbar'i can sale that for free' make $0. a transfer sent to ur banco' nig u gotsta go!
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73100, RE: '10 inch rim ryder Posted by tonka truck, Tue Apr-01-08 05:09 PM
april fool and you must be the joke riding on rubberburner and stanking thunnder pop pa wheelies with no spokes you tiny pussy can't save willie just like ike made tina your just a cherry turner dope
yes you are i'm addicted pseudo to the way other nigga's get it salvation screaming army revolving door you never get it hoar enough grab the soap
if your boared
and say my name while strokes in tubes why cliff pick pack clubs strum lining chicks who claim they so innocent but at ever other corner they bent and getting cheeks smack gobbling dicks
baby you've been drinking to much lil kim stay off the rim and those retarded sundowner punch bowels and roll up your sleeve and get with this zero
coming from half woman half niggro what that make you dike
elbow deep but i ain't no captin save a ho even though i got the anker and you the one with the simplex shanker cold soar on your up treason just because you want to be on my lable i see your easy just what is the meaning
behind
i hate you i love you bipolar B
yeah hold this.
peace who ever you are and if your name don't began with my get lost!
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73127, LOL Posted by Babynoon, Wed Apr-02-08 11:08 AM
pardon me lilwillie I mean pop a millie bitch still fakin like vanilli'vanilla,but sour come shots meltin ur mans mouth'peace is ceased you got nerve to breathe'after Christ I tried to save your wife if I had a dick trust atleast id do it right'put it in right
lol damn
fix your agender and your gender malefem hermanthadites made you' and we question "so What u are?"
Please get help your mind is sicker than rabbis sicker than ur male friend havin ur baby'hermandite typo click you wan dis try again if im a dike than you're next kin'
I touched one pussy and this is it' and it came wishing you went'north to the end and fell off' Dikes no disrespect,but this dick's blamin me for the rise he could never deliver' so remember him or shim shehim faggot limp mr.tonkapinto a nosie cyber ho'
Lil kim swallowed cans you would know, but to compare makes you suspect'uve been fucked n ur mouthhole'each word stinkier than the shit u wrote last go' whatevers next flush the hurt in stoolheart'im sendin whocares in regards. Edit: im pray n that u wake up soon.....before noon gets mad atchu.
I know them buttons
check MJB's track ROSES! I dedicate it to you sweetheart.
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73136, RE: LOL Posted by tonka truck, Wed Apr-02-08 01:56 PM
str. off the chain gang and base heads bang i see you standing infront of the seven 11 open all night wit fangs dripping white owl peach so what i sleep naked on the beach but you need to change your dialog because your pencil is bog down with perverted sound effects you got a man but why you keep coming around because i'm keeping you so so so wet and i don't have to clear a dam thing up but i don't fuck wit the same sex leaving you eye lids vex this ain't no voo doo who do hex i'm the first to accept christ as savoir of life and god's son but i'm not they one 2 claim i'm a christian leading wit curse words and flipping birds to get bye i don't try to blend i don't pretend to be something i know nothing about that's why i shout and blow buddha from my lungs king knog couldn't even handle this dragon lost wieght now my pants saggin no i'm not bragging i got a big one or a stiff one i'm a realist you just want to feel this penis the realist nigga you ever came in contact and i ain't even blow out your back so why don't you stay off my sack or just roll it up between your tongue i'm done
queen elizabeth- to the top next drop drop it hot and rub it on you belly i really don't believe your a lady a man that is confuse
i'm looking for a woman no a she be he be
nice .org you should do porn key west chi-town bump on
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73141, Pornlip Posted by Babynoon, Wed Apr-02-08 04:37 PM
.....track record you've been redirected' don't attempt to reroute me or thee they know who she could be'retro or eccentrically this right here is the O C old see'
let it be let it be
your dickhead can't help them or me'keep the infected in check Dr.Nuki Yaki wants you checked again T' remember not to die from sex Te' perverted?who? if I wan it I can get it'but rather airsex 8yrs moreover' mind write some knew scripts cause this right here is not it.
ROSES M.J.B dedicated to you
love sent always ;(
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73144, RE: rabbit pebbles 4 brains Posted by tonka truck, Wed Apr-02-08 06:45 PM
you say i was redirected hey got to respect it who am i attempting 2 save you ain't a slave and the rest of them are brave concave blood cells waiting for band rebel sickle sells make red spots on fronts of hoods i no that i ain't no good wit this rapping and stuff but until you had enough you ain't got no choice but to listen jesus was not god didn't even carry a rod like moses you already know this but at least if i believe he was ressurrected like osirius and lazurus demon then my faith has meaning trinity triad the three holy or some same pure ones i'm really tired of you talking that scum suicide alley cat talk if you the person you say you are just walk the walk i place you in a school girl chalk check the box if you want to get down but all you do is clown you must be a lonely old person with nothing else to do yeah i boo who because i'm homeless wit a lpn license but it ain't in my hand a paralegal but ain't got a motion to stand on haven't eat a full course meal in about a week but i ain't week and my sneekers starting to squeek when on the run but i ain't done and i refuse to plea bargin wit a cops following around the block i come here to speak my mind and all you spill is cock come follow me you say if you want it you can have it but i haven't even seen it the trust the honesty your personality just alot of brandy bunch thongs stuck on a computer screen i use to get mean and dawg people for fun butknow i refuse to pull the trigger of a gun never saw a picture of you if your taller then five two or fatter then 122 then i'm threw you talk about the company you keep yo crew drinkers you a all day smoker i'm not down for that infact i don't even know why i mumble at all i accept the defeat and humbley fall so why don't you call ems and brag and say your the best i've been trusted with some much less but soon babynoon i'ma have so much more and i don't hope i'm for sure being poor is part of the struggle my god the dragon i believe chest tize his childern before the be reward to make sure thier worthy to be praised i don't care if people say i'm gay i'll find friends one day i tossed awy those whos say they love me mainly family they don't call me the set me up to take the dump in the bushes and they want me to support thier vision come on you must be kinding you want to be real with me you want to feel me i paid the fee for VA nursing license but guess what my so called family wouldn't even give up because i got it sent to thier address what a mess w-2 papers too trashed in a garbage can zoo haven't seen you know who for approx 8 years my daughter really don't know the exact time from blurred eye sight from to many tear nobody cares except my moms and i hate putting her threw this yeah i'm the youngest and i know it's breaking her heart specially when dallas police hand gator a dart in the dark for litter it kilt her can you remember the journey from chi town to motor city even then no one showed me pitty couldn't spare a penny but yet i didn't still or kill for money i just went hungery in soup lines but i smile and say everythings fine now you come attempting to play mind games for a little bit of fame bring it let it rain i use to it but you know this well i hope you do everything i write on here is true turn down for jobs because of 16year old out dated theft charges father was murdered when i was two but i grew now i post raps and in the mist of it the computer collapse and it's gone what's up wit that i started making beat and somebody stole my recipe you talking about just let it be why wont they let me be the stole mom's money that she gave to me for christmas when i was staying in the deluxe motel who i'm tell they say i'm a thug a mence but it at finish craved in granite but i fanilly understand it i ain't no bandit but the rob me pilgrims pride they wouldn't even let my videos ride on myspace all the hard work no response from nobody but a chick that thinks shes it not but you don't see me climbing to the top emipre state building waiting to drop because it's all a plot to break ones spirit and covert you into what they want you to be but i be god dam if it's going to happen fuck my family except my mom fuck those stealing my videos, my beats my rap sheet,fuck those church people saying they care i rather get but fucked by a big bear he was once here hello are you listen you think i'm tripping but in all fairness i wish death upon every body who stir the pot and that's that keep being smart and i'll blow a silemt fart and you'll never here from me again
itire to give you props but you to big for your britches
peace out holla at you later if i feel like it
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73158, identity crisis Posted by Babynoon, Thu Apr-03-08 11:33 AM
oh when you feel like it'
if I feel like being bothered, that is :(
Life's wierdly rhetorical'to add again my wall is thick not hollow My ego is as big as a hair follicle' if this bothers you
reroute your crew they're feelin blackangels'im white like Charlies Angels and you call me dangerous??? ur whole crew of faces r venomous'i got bit so i'm forminpuss? plus ur the genius and I never accepted anything meaningless' all I do eventually make sense or cents,but for this riot we're rankin ish'
this was useless no one needed to peepthis
and I put this where they shouldn't have 2see it'but u got the great gift so they must see this ishhhhhhhhhhhh.
endedit no editing P dot S n
I do get ur motto sum objections,but n do time the wrong was so right.
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73163, I liked this Posted by spades, Thu Apr-03-08 02:35 PM
especially the repetition - on that, I think you can omit the "They tried to" from the preceding stanzas after the 1st line. I think it will be just as powerful, and will make your language more precise.
On the positive side, I really LOVE the rhythm you develope here, and the metaphors and similies are clever and on point too.
Thanks for sharing.
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73417, Returned Exchanged No Refunds? Posted by Babynoon, Tue Apr-15-08 05:51 AM
Hey what's happenin'Rog?
I came n to check the re-runs and the ish's eye fun' reading our little battle under the sun No hard feelings we've watered the small fire' that's what I like'i bought a ticket to battle, but needed a refund' your product aint hittin'your rap is for dumb bitches'thats why i don't get it' im not the one don't get sensitive'ur cross eye keep it focused'im not lookin and you're still booking? lol I won not you kid'
I brung the hit list' you got sprung by my word gun' they got you done
we found your feet on a run'we shot your mind with death thoughts when your ryhme comes
u r done! done done ((echoed))
'your shits been off beat til the Sam Man got down and out tapped your try 'like stop You still get Booooo oooooo off eachtime'bye bye
I came to drop u a line'you can never ryhme'Ezzential notices too that you're a waste of all womens time' Get another boyfriend and you will be fine.
loll
I love you bitchass Fuck u
Edit: Add
ps: yeah im distasteful to you cause I had to hate you'it was written.
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73603, RE: gotta let me go Posted by freedomfighter, Mon Apr-21-08 06:10 PM
ya'll two come on shit was funy no fairy tail endings ever happen in new york VA is for pirate lovers of plundering shark fins
soup anybody
"nice" smooth ass a jagged edge old warsaw dallas best restyrrant Freeworld Order Dangurus Mines
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73606, RE: gotta let me go Posted by Babynoon, Mon Apr-21-08 08:30 PM
pull
the truck was towed from times sq. to shadeyville......fx.
thank you 4uplifting this masqurade
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